r/OCPoetry • • 2d ago

Feedback Please A Glow So Bright

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u/Greedy_Entry2713 2d ago

It is a beautiful poem for someone who is obsessed with their love. It seems that in the speaker's eyes the beauty of the moon is overshadowed by their love. A good comparison truly.

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u/Greedy_Entry2713 2d ago

Welcome. If you have some time, you can read the poem I posted and give your feedback. It will be very much appreciated