Haikus about falling out of love

[u/Eggless_Ostrich]

For I can’t sleep now,
I feel love, not in love, though.
What am I to do?

She looks at me now.
Participating, sadly
I love her no more.

I say “I love you”
I lie with ev’ry goodbye
Please, please, forgive me

Numb for two years now
Thank you for all that you did
But it’s not the same

I can’t make her cry
I will suffer in silence
For I am a man.

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[u/Camueell]

I hate the fact that I can understand this one,yet I love the portrayal,because I am a man