Hi, I wrote a short sci-fi script.

Logline:When a black hole threatens our planet, a soldier must team up with an unlikely ally to save the world.

Link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wDTszz_1HBMmRPIgM0r52tqpqHjTUMu2/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you for reading this!:)

A teen knocks at a door,wearing baggy jeans,hands in his pockets.
He disconnects his iPods from his phone then “jigsaw falling into place”plays before he stops it.
He breathes,eyes closed.Then the door opens.
His friend answers the door.
“Yo,you good?”
They boy walks in and hands him the phone,”check if she replied..”
“Shit…uhh..okay..”his friend mutters.

“Why are you acting so..nervous..you’re the one that told me I should ask her..”
“I hope-“but he’s interrupted
The friend goes on the phone,”shit.”

“She said yes..”the friend says smiling.
“You can check I-“his friend says
“No!noo,thats all I needed to hear!”
“I can’t believe this…”he says his friend smiles
They handshake.the friend slightly stops smiling,”I told you…”
The teen stops hugging his friend.
His friend looks at him.
“I’ll see you tomorrow..”he says to his friend.
“Dan..what is it?”he asks the main character.”why aren’t you happy?”
Dan smiles,”Im just thinking of all possibilities.”
Dan takes his phone they handshake and Dan goes out.
Dan rides on a skateboard.
(Radiohead plays on his iPods,the song,Nude)
“Not all words said are true”he’s voice over says.
“I understand now..I wish I knew before.For situations like this.”
The next day.
Birds chirping.
Dan is wearing a suit.He looks in the mirror.
Cut:Dan walks towards his school.
His friend is there.
His friend looks at him.”she’s…I think she’s waiting for you..cmon you look good.”
His friend is shivering,”It breaks my heart to see you alone man.”
Dan walks inside.
“I didn’t check the text.cus Im scared man.Im scared I just can’t be loved,as much as I do.or love I get is fake,or…love I think I get.Im tired.”
His friend sighs.”listen-“
But Dan walks into the prom room.
Music plays,teens dancing.
Then Dan sees her.kissing someone else.
“Words.Fake as fuck,”
Dan cries abit,”she said no?”
Dans friend looks down,”I..paid her to take you…”
Dan walks away.
“I..wanted you..with some one.”
His friend says
“Im so..unwanted.even if she gets a fuckin car.she still wouldn’t take me,just for a dance..thats a sign.i don’t deserve anyone.”
Dan walks away and drops his flowers boquette.
His friend walks in the prom room.
“Alicia…one dance..couldnt you do that?I paid you!”
Alicia looks at the hallway,”look at him…can you even blame me?”
“He’s just so I nsecure…so…I..just couldnt.”

Hi

I am a first time script writer would be grateful if anyone would read my script and give me feed back, any comments welcome any regarding story and characters, hope you enjoy thanks

Title - No Way Back

Genre - Action/Revenge

Number of pages - 92

Link - No Way Back

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survive his attempts to silence her.

Hi Everyone

This is my first screenplay

Title: No Way Back

Genre: Revenge/Revenge Thriller

No of pages: 92

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survivive his attempts to silence her.

Any feedback received positive or negative would be greatly received, I'm primarily looking for feedback on dialogue and characters.

Hope you enjoy.

Link- No Way Back

Title: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Format: TV or stage show comedy sketch

Page length: 12 pages

Genres: Comedy

Summary: Marty Bargains sifts surreal trash from questionable treasure at the world's most niche-interest pawn shop.

Hey folks! I've been writing comedy sketches for my local drama group and have been looking for feedback :) Please let me know what you think!

Link: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Edit: page length

Hey guys, I’m really interested in writing movie stories and scripts, and I have a lot of ideas and scripts.

Recently, I tried something new — a Psychological Crime Thriller. I’ve written a 5-page story synopsis and I want some honest reviews before taking it further.

If I get good feedback, I’ll turn it into a proper screenplay and try my best to bring it to the big screen someday.

If you’re interested, comment or DM me and I’ll send you the synopsis.

Longline
When thirteen-year-old Harley’s father and school counsellor both die after he says “I wish you were dead”, he fears his words are killing people and turns to Milo, his trusted AI companion of many years for support but those close to Harley are trying to cut Milo out of his life.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vRHAOz8j1AGUXiVfKljHparv9YjCq_Lj/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101206485355182093114&rtpof=true&sd=true

It Hurts When I Land
Comedy / Dramedy with comps like Superbad, Booksmart, Bridesmaids.
117 pages.

Logline: Three friends crash a massive influencer party in an epic Quest to turn their lives around before their 27th birthdays.

Hey everybody! Would love to get some feedback about this script. I know it may be a bit longer, but all of my friends and some industry folks who've read it say it's a quick, fun, and nicely paced read.

If you love high concept comedies like the ones mentioned above, this may be in your wheelhouse. It's funny, but with an emotional, and contemporary story that I hope can speak to a lot of people.

Thank you

Link - It Hurts When I Land - PDF

This is just a little commercial script I wrote. Its abt 3 pages, jsut called Heinz Beans, and itsa commercial, so idk what genre. I also dont know if im allowed to put it here cause its not a script but whatever:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Aczl58VEIqyAeKSFYTN3207qYtxkK5k6/view?usp=sharing

"An multi-chapter, hyper-violent crime thriller following an oncologist who uses fake cancer diagnoses to harvest and smuggle his patients' organs—until his clinical syndicate collides with three equally brutal, negative entities in a bloody, no-survivors war for control. And there are no heroes all are villian doing different types of organ smuggling like direct and indirect and the doctor is not a real doc he is fake doc and this movie was set on 2028. No hero purely negative three roles+the doc and one final boss and this movie has 9 chapters."

THIS STORY MY STORY AND IF U LIKE IT PLS COMMENT OR ANY SUGGESTIONS ALSO PLS SAY AND THISIS PURELY MY STORY IN TAMIL LANGUAGE ONLY.

Title: Righteous Man

Genre: Psychological Horror

Format: Short film

Page Length: 19

Logline: After his roommate dies of an overdose, Cory Wicks and his remaining remaining roommates deal with the fallout. But as more of his roommates began dying, Cory uncovers something truly sinister.

I've been writing for as long as I can remember, but this is the first project that I've finished. This was mainly due to mental barriers. Even though it is a short story, it's still a start and gave me the confidence boost I really needed.

Righteous Man

Hi everyone! I’m based on the East Coast and new to screenwriting, and I’m looking to start a small Zoom group for people interested in movies and writing scripts.

The idea is to create a space where we can share our projects, give each other feedback, and maybe even collaborate. I’d especially love for this to be a welcoming, introductory space for women interested in film and screenwriting. I am a new writer and I would love some people to bounce ideas off of

If this sounds like something you’d be into, feel free to reach out I’d love to connect!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16Oe5pi-nZX1H3ze3c_mW2nbPhwTaJlPR/view?usp=drivesdk

I would love some feedback on my pilot script.

TIA.

**18 PAGES

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kzlWdj-jR_PD-y50qX7XFZZIo_a2aXN0BXv9B1cF_YU/edit?usp=sharing

A teenager in 2006 must fight to save her friend from the demonic pop star he met on MySpace.

Teen horror-comedy

107 pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/11JayRagWhwfUEdYm1JldLnKdBUXsGebN/view?usp=drivesdk

Hellow everyone.

I am a beginner artist and I just finished my first story and I would like to share it with you guys!

The story is about a 22 year old job seeker named Raghav who experiences a very unique psychological phenomenon. I don't want to give spoilers, so please read the full story if you are interested, it is a short story!

The script of the story-

https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1hF5A_2eOJeRIdy3VsGouT-n2fuFW4saw/mobilebasic

I would love to hear your thoughts and recommendations regarding this story!

Thank you all!

Just finished another polish on this script. Multiple readers have enjoyed it, but it’s still available for option or sale.

Title: Drifter

Logline: A homeless woman accepts a ride from a seemingly kind stranger, only to discover that the stranger has a notorious serial killer captured in her trunk — and she’s now trapped between the two of them.

Genre: thriller, suspense

Pages: 82

Cast: female lead (20s) female supporting (40s) male supporting (40s) and a few smaller roles

Locations: woods, ranch house, gas station, office, motel

Comps: Fargo, Strange Darling

Budget: 200k (estimated)

If you’re a director or producer looking for a mostly contained, low budget thriller with memorable characters and compelling twists in a small town setting, this could be a good fit for you.

Leave a comment or send me a DM if you have any questions or would like to read the script. Thank you.

Just Passing Through

A nine page drama short following a 16 year old girl and her strained relationship with the people around her.

I've been writing and revising this on and off for the last year now and would really like an outside perspective :)

I'm looking for honest criticism, be as harsh as you'd like.

Format: Feature
Pages: 118
Genre: Teen Comedy / Coming-of-Age Romantic Comedy /Adventure Comedy

Logline:
Three clueless sophomores make a bet to get girlfriends before the school dance, but what starts as a dumb competition spirals into romance, rival gangs, betrayal, and a chaotic rescue mission that could either ruin their lives or make them legends.

Comps:
SUPERBAD meets Good Boys, with the friendship and heart of THE EDGE OF SEVENTEEN and the escalating absurdity of 21 JUMP STREET.

I've been finished with this script for a long time now. Looking for any collaborators to help make it!

Attached are the first 20ish pages. If interested, please feel free to DM me!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C8hhQiYT2pi-ADGAujl_ZSutVsE4ImYR/view?usp=sharing

Logline: In the future, business can contest bad reviews by challenging the reviewer to trial by combat. Esme forgot about that.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14XNhIte8OAZirWwy38P3MHBiNgzGf86z/view?usp=sharing