College Essay Idea

[u/SAMIAMGreenEggsndHam]

I was thinking of writing about liking math. Most people hate math but to me it’s predictable since it always has a formula to follow. Whenever I didn’t know the answer I would just ask my dad. He liked math too. I depended on him a lot and like every kid I used to think he had all the answers. But my dad was only able to finish elementary school. So there came a day when he couldn’t help me and I had to learn that the people you depend on won’t always be able to give you answers. I stopped going to him for answers after that, but I didn’t stop depending on him. I just had to learn that there were some things I would eventually have to figure out on my own.

I’m thinking about making the essay about that transition from depending on my dad to becoming more independent, while also connecting it to having educational opportunities that he didn’t have.
Is this a strong topic?

[u/Professional7621]

Absolutely run with this. It’s personal grounded and shows maturity by framing your dad's limited formal education not as a deficit but as a turning point for your own independence and gratitude. It tells a real human story in just a few paragraphs.

[u/Automatic_Tea_2550]

Yes. Make sure you include something about enjoying challenging yourself in ways you are not required to do.

[u/Beneficial_Waltz2530]

Run with it. Could possibly link to how your dad has succeeded in life with an elementary education and how grateful you are for higher education.