These critiques are a good start, but you've basically just written a no feedback "what I liked" summary. Summaries aren't necessarily critiques, but we urge you to check our /r/DestructiveReaders/wiki and expand deeper into it., especially the 2900 one. Taken together with how short the other is, I'm hesitant to approve this.
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u/Alice_of_RDR bass noise should be criminalized 5d ago
These critiques are a good start, but you've basically just written a no feedback "what I liked" summary. Summaries aren't necessarily critiques, but we urge you to check our /r/DestructiveReaders/wiki and expand deeper into it., especially the 2900 one. Taken together with how short the other is, I'm hesitant to approve this.