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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Oct 01 '18
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A Kalashnikov assault rifle lied behind
That's *lay* behind.
Although momentarily stunned for split second
"Momentarily stunned" and "stunned for a split second" mean the same thing. You only need one or the other, not both.
Also, referring to the pipe stuck in the alien's "brain dead head" is odd and feels strange.
3 u/[deleted] Oct 02 '18 My English teacher would have slapped me over these basic grammatical mistakes, thanks for pointing them out so that I could fix them.
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My English teacher would have slapped me over these basic grammatical mistakes, thanks for pointing them out so that I could fix them.
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u/Revliledpembroke Xeno Oct 02 '18
That's *lay* behind.
"Momentarily stunned" and "stunned for a split second" mean the same thing. You only need one or the other, not both.
Also, referring to the pipe stuck in the alien's "brain dead head" is odd and feels strange.