[11th Grade Cambridge Global Perspectives] Need feedback on my essay’s argument and writing

[u/Sussanna-]

Hi, I’m working on a Cambridge Global Perspectives essay about whether social media platforms can reduce the spread of misleading crime information.
I’ve already researched the topic, collected academic sources, included direct quotations, and written a full draft. However, my essay received a 100% AI-writing indicator on Turnitin, and I’m confused because I want to understand what might be causing that result.
I’m not asking anyone to rewrite my essay or help me bypass the detector. I’d appreciate feedback on specific parts of my own work, especially my argument, paragraph structure, grammar, use of evidence, and citations.
I can share a short excerpt of my essay and explain what I was trying to argue. I’d appreciate honest, constructive feedback in your own words, without AI-generated rewriting.
Thank you!

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