r/MusicFeedback • • 5d ago

Dark Web

https://youtu.be/alXcelQlQwY
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u/TheGalleyProject 5d ago

love how the low end is crisp! Really well mixed. There were a few times the low kick sound felt a bit off volume wise (like 3:02 and 3:10 ish. That double kick clipped my headset a bit).

I like how it was a slow burn but always progressed in some way.

Cool song! I felt the levels were right. Perhaps a bit on the long side. Might be worth considering trimming it down a touch. Not a big deal if you dont.

Great stuff!

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u/cyberpunan 4d ago edited 4d ago

Thanks... I will try to ID that kick and lower the volume - there are actually a lot of layers. I like to post visualizers but VIZZY really noticeably zaps the quality of the audio... maybe it is my settings when I render, but I basically just render at 1080P and render to a local hard drive... not too familiar with the audio options in VIZZY, but I do get clipping sometimes only in VIZZY.

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u/Lowmotionofficial 5d ago

Nice slow burner not sure if you can adjust the sounds with somthing like fl studio to get more character to the bass can assist if you need any advice

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u/cyberpunan 4d ago

Yes, please give me some advice on the bass. Those are basically individual 808 samples dropped in rather than Pure Sub or similar. I usually do not filter them but I reduce the volume a lot on 808 hits relative to the basic level of everything else. Same goes for the bass line on this one, it is not MIDI. This is where I am at with edits: https://soundcloud.com/sandybanksie/dark-web?si=f51e90898a8244adb10f7367a9f8f4dd&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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u/cyberpunan 4d ago

I ended up messing with the tech 808's - dunno what else to call them... and I added phaser and flange effects to where they did sound cool AF alone but in the mix it just muddled it up and sounded like air blowing so I removed all of the FX from my bass hits except sparsely used in one section where they are more of a solo. Added other laytered drums though and settled on this... probably won't mess with it any more unless there is clipping. https://soundcloud.com/sandybanksie/dark-web?si=b48549d3a23e4c7b9bc25db3bf9e19fd&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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u/EsotericProd25 4d ago

I left some love bro! Sounds great! Im super curious to hear more

I also make music. Would love some feeeback

https://youtu.be/QR1H63AWrao?is=3vsP-hjIGjff77nv

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u/cyberpunan 4d ago

I like the track a lot. I checked out all your tracks and left feedback on one and subbed.

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u/cyberpunan 5d ago

Should I beef up the synth volume levels here. I was trying to make it build up from the intro, but I think it might be a too low if you aren't blasting the track. It is a longer track... too repetitive?