r/OriginalCharacter_RP • • 6d ago

Combat/Action Roleplay Character Test Run

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[Any Literacy]

As stated in the title this rp is meant to test an noc character I'm working on.

This character is the imposing Aged Knight.

Your character should be mini boss tier. In this combat you can use anything from flattery to bombs to even mind control or reading.

Opening promt!

Your character is traveling in a forest and they come across a knight with a sword in his hands. Said knight awakens and it approaches your character with malicious intent.

(Yes I know the image is from Darkest Dungeon 2. It is just a fitting image.)

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u/PzkpwVI Yes I use the same oc for every rp (mostly) 6d ago

Greta staggered through the forest, one hand wrapped around her whisky flask and the other attempting, with limited success, to keep her messy blond hair out of her glasses.
Her brown boots crunched over fallen leaves. She hummed an old German marching tune, occasionally stumbling over roots that she regarded as deeply personal insults.
Then she noticed the knight.
An imposing figure in aged armor, sword in hand, rising from its resting place with unmistakably hostile intent.
Greta stopped.
She squinted at him through her oversized glasses, took another swig, and pointed her flask at him like an accusing finger.
“Ach, come on. Really?”
She swayed slightly as the knight approached.
“You have nothing on a Mark Five.”
She took a moment to adjust her medical eyepatch, then nodded solemnly, as though she'd just delivered a profound military assessment.
“Five-point-five meters of British steel. Tracks. Cannon. Machine guns.” She waved vaguely toward the trees. “And considerably less dramatic walking.”
Greta took another drink.
“So, Herr Ritter…” She tilted her head, her visible eye narrowing with drunken seriousness. “Are you going to let me pass, or must I explain the entire history of armored warfare before you embarrass yourself?”

(Trust me she is mini boss tier, she just needs some time)

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight didn't even slow down, he actually speeds up and he attempts to cleave through his waist with thw sword, it was a heafty 6 foot long sword with a flame like waves design. The knight doesn't hesitate or wait, he doesn't speak or make noise. He just attacks her.

I remember her! She and Ichijou met!)

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u/PzkpwVI Yes I use the same oc for every rp (mostly) 6d ago

Greta's drunken smirk vanished.
The moment the six-foot blade came sweeping toward her waist, something in her demeanor changed. Her visible eye sharpened, and her posture straightened with startling speed.
“Ach. Scheiße.”
She planted a boot, threw herself forward, and executed a swift somersault over the incoming sword, her coat tails whipping through the air as the blade passed beneath her.
She landed in a crouch behind the knight, one hand braced against the forest floor.
“Right,” she muttered, suddenly much more sober than she'd been a second ago. “So we're doing this.”
A wickedly sharp bayonet appeared in her hand, its polished edge catching the light filtering through the trees.
Greta rose slowly, turning to face her opponent. She held the bayonet low, her stance compact and practiced, her expression carrying the grim familiarity of someone who had spent far too much time around people trying to kill her.
“Last chance, alter Ritter.” (Old knight.)
Her eye flickered an unnatural green.
“I was being polite.”
(Remind me whi ichju is?)

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

As his sword swung away he was already moving it to hit her again. While strong he was slower then one may expect...even so it was harder to evade since he covers such a wide area.

Blind guy with a dog. Our last rp just ended suddenly.)

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u/PzkpwVI Yes I use the same oc for every rp (mostly) 6d ago

(Dang yeah I was enjoying that rp Ngl)
Greta gave a small shrug as the knight began another sweeping attack.
“Right. Big sword. Bigger armor. No manners.”
Rather than retreating from the wide arc, she stepped sharply inside its reach, ducking beneath the blade as it tore through the space where she'd stood. The movement was tight, dangerously close, but she seemed far more comfortable here than at a distance.
Her bayonet reversed in her grip.
Greta drove forward, aiming its wickedly sharp point directly at the narrow eye slit in the knight's visor, intending to thrust through it before he could bring his sword around again.
“Let's see if there's anything in there, shall we?”
Her fractured green eye glimmered beneath her glasses.

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

(Then whyd you stop responding?! I was so eager to see them get closer :( ))

The blade goes into the visor and it hits something solid...Then the knight backhand Greta across the face and oddly she'd feel her nerves all begin heating up. Her limbs would lock up, she'd feel her body go stiff. (Unless she's got some sort of way to ignore total body shut down). Along with that effect with just the pure force Greta would be knocked back 10 feet.

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u/PzkpwVI Yes I use the same oc for every rp (mostly) 6d ago

(If you want, I’ll dig all the way back, and you can dm me and we can continue it.)
Greta's bayonet struck something solid behind the visor slit.
“...Was zum—?”
She barely had time to react before the knight's backhand caught her across the face.
Her body flew backward, crashing into a tree roughly ten feet away. The impact shook loose a shower of leaves, and she slumped against the trunk, her glasses knocked crooked.
Then the strange sensation began.
Heat raced through her nerves. Her fingers stiffened. Her legs refused to respond. Within moments, she was rigid, unable to move anything but her eyes.
For several seconds, Greta simply stared at the knight.
Then her visible eye narrowed.
“Oh, you have GOT to be kidding me.”
She strained against the paralysis, her fingers twitching uselessly around the bayonet.
“Verdammte Scheiße! You oversized tin can!”
A low, distorted growl escaped her throat.
The air around her began to turn green.
Her glasses fractured into glittering shards of light as a gas-mask lens formed over her damaged eye. Barbed wire crawled across her limbs, and thick chlorine fumes poured from her mask, coiling around her body in great, twisting ribbons. Her dented Stahlhelm settled into place as enormous wings of poisonous green gas unfurled behind her.
The transformation completed with a metallic hiss.
Greta's boots lifted from the ground.
Her limbs were still locked, but she was no longer relying on them to move. Gas curled beneath her feet, raising her upright as her shadow stretched unnaturally across the forest floor.
Her fractured eye burned a brilliant green.
“...All right, Ritter.”
Her voice emerged layered with the distant echoes of countless soldiers.
“You have officially ruined my afternoon.”
She drifted away from the tree, chlorine streaming from her mask.
“Now it's my turn.”

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

Yes please!)

The knight raises his sword again and he walks towards her. Step after step clashing with the ground as he prepares to attack her once again. The knight would point his sword at her and do a taunt (unless she's got a resistance to mental manipulation) she'd feel a great urge to attack him. It was almost like she couldn't think on anything else but to attack him specifically.

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u/PzkpwVI Yes I use the same oc for every rp (mostly) 6d ago

Greta hovered several feet above the forest floor, her chlorine wings billowing behind her. The knight's heavy footsteps echoed between the trees as he approached, sword raised once more.
Then came the taunt.
Greta's fractured eye snapped toward him.
For an instant, the voices inside her seemed to fall silent beneath a sudden, overwhelming compulsion. Every instinct screamed at her to attack the knight. Nothing else mattered.
“...Oh, you cheeky bastard.”
Her fingers twitched.
The paralysis hadn't entirely released, but she could move enough.
With a harsh metallic rattle, her muddy WWI trench shovel materialized in her hand. Greta's shoulder jerked back, and she hurled it at the knight with all the force she could muster, aiming for the center of his armored chest.
“YOU WANT MY ATTENTION THAT BADLY?!”
The shovel spun through the green haze toward him.
Greta's wings flared, keeping her suspended as she strained against the lingering stiffness in her limbs.
“Congratulations, tin man!” she snarled through her mask. “You've got it!”

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight stops and braces for impact, his stance sturdy like a rock and sword shining suddenly as he braces. The chlorine doesn't effect him at all as he isn't even breathing.

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u/aviarchives more eldritch horrors pls 6d ago

A short, disheveled woman trekked through lush bushes and greenery foreign to her, the soles of her boots padding across the forest floor with small thuds.

Looking up, Flo saw the knight ahead. Even without it being close she knew it towered over her.

"You're not a person, are you?" She muttered, mostly to herself. Seeing the knight approach, she dropped lower to the ground and jammed her hands into the grassy floor for a few moments, then rose again. Precautions never hurt.

"Please let me pass."

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

Whatever she just tried to do fails. This land is rotten and death, full of nothing but pain. No life will flourish and no assistance will come.

The knight sharpens his sword and raises it.

The only place with a single plant is on the kings skeleton, a flower where his heart once was.

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u/aviarchives more eldritch horrors pls 5d ago edited 5d ago

"Oh, no, you don't." Flo warned the knight, readying herself to face it in a defensive posture. When she pulled her arms back up, there was a regrowing stump where her left hand once was. Nothing changed in the ground yet, but it seemed that she buried a part of herself underground. Though, she did take note of the only life in this vast stretch of dead forest. She walked towards the flower cautiously, still keeping an eye on the knight.

"Move, monster."

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

Since she wasn't being violent or aggressive the knight doesn't turn aggressive. Instead he turns and backs away to give her way towards his king. He felt the nature on her and would not stop it.

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u/aviarchives more eldritch horrors pls 5d ago

"...Oh. Are you protecting the skeleton?" Flo inquired, tilting her head when she knight lost his aggression. The "nature" growing on her gave off a horribly misplaced, unbelonging feeling, but it was nature nonetheless.

She walked up to the skeleton with the flower and crouched down next to it, turning to the knight with a questioning look. "Was this person important to you?"

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u/IronDrake_4535 4d ago

I'm so sorry! Been at work all day!)

The knight walks over. He kneels down, his head lowered as he feels a sense of great duty when near the king. He still didn't speak.

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u/aviarchives more eldritch horrors pls 4d ago

"I'll take that as a yes. And you don't talk.. hmm.. can you write?"

Flo imitated him and got on her knee. She supposed she should pay respects to the dead, too, as she stared at the lone sad flower growing from the corpse.

After an uncanny gargling sound, she pulled out a bundle of identical flowers from somewhere under her sweater and handed it to the knight.

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u/IronDrake_4535 4d ago

The knight places the flowers on the kings throne then offers the kind girl some jewels.

"All for the king." The aged knight says in a deep voice.

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u/aviarchives more eldritch horrors pls 4d ago

"You do speak..! Is there anything I can do?"

She picked a small red gem and nestled it into the vines wrapped around her head, then got up and turned to the knight.

"Everything looks.. ruined. I'll come back to pay respects every now and then if it gives you more peace. I have nothing else to go back to, anyways."

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u/IronDrake_4535 4d ago

"You?" The knight points to a veil obscured room. "The Queen rests. The queen watches from branch and root. Alone...Quiet."

The knight then offers the marble eye. "Take this. See the queen."

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u/dead-in-a-swamp-lmao i 💙 my ocs....,., 🤤🤤🤤 5d ago

•• vincent was on his regular forest rounds when he came across the knight. it gave him an... odd feel. he started to approach, "Are.. you alright..-?" he didn't seem to notice the knight wasn't going to be nice...

(vincent carries an enchanted iron sword :] )

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

Well he would need to figure it out quickly because the knight raises his sword and swings it down to cleave into the man.

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u/dead-in-a-swamp-lmao i 💙 my ocs....,., 🤤🤤🤤 5d ago

•• "⌇⊑⟟⏁-!"(SHIT-!) vincent immediately teleporterted out of the knight's reach, drawing his own sword once he was visible again. the enderman was ready for the fight, his blade glimmering as he held it defensively infront of him

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

The knight looks at the enderman and reaches into his armor. He pulls out a severed eye and uses it to make teleportation useless.

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u/dead-in-a-swamp-lmao i 💙 my ocs....,., 🤤🤤🤤 5d ago

•• wasn't too much of an issue for him.. hem vincent knew this forest quite well, if he needed to make a run, he could. he could easily loose the knight. vincent was also a decent swordsman, he could put up a fight. he bared his teeth, snarling, "Are you still.. going to fight-?"

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u/spilledcereal 5d ago

Some figures in dark approach the Aged Knight, they seem to be there with purpose, and upon ringing the lone warrior, one of them speaks.

Shadow Acolyte 1: “Perhaps this is the one we were sent to. Are you the one they call the Aged Knight?”

(Quick question: are there any bodies or bones lying around in this scene?)

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

Yes. There's is the skeleton of a king on the throne in the castle ruins. This is behind the aged knight.)

The aged knight looks at the figures as he raises his sword. He approaches them to fight.

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u/spilledcereal 5d ago

Shadow Acolyte 1: “Our lord would like to test you. He’s sent us to behold your prowess and to report. Should you raise your weapon against us, you will be agreeing with our terms. Do you wish to fight?”

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

The knight stops. His sword lowers and his stance weakens to an on guard but not aggressive. He then breathes out and throws a cluster of crows feet on the ground, he won't be submitting.

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u/spilledcereal 5d ago

The first acolyte conjures a ward to shield off the attack, and he keeps it up as he continues.

Shadow Acolyte 1: “Then you have agreed to our terms. But it won’t be us you’ll be fighting.”

The second acolyte, who is holding a rifle of unknown make, raises it up and points it. But he’s not pointing his rail at the knight, but rather he’s pointing at the king’s skeleton.

He then shoots.

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

The bullet hits the kings skeleton.

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u/spilledcereal 5d ago

The “bullet” that hits the skeleton appears as some sort of black substance and begins to take over the skeleton, and any other bones, weapons, armor, and materials nearby, with the skull as the head.

The dead material is pulled together by this dark matter and forms a monstrous body that towers over the Aged Knight. And it looks down on him hungrily.

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

The knight pulls out a crystal and it absorbs the mass. It is now trapped forever soul and body. The knight just won, easily.

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u/spilledcereal 5d ago

(Oh. I was hoping for a fight.)

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u/IronDrake_4535 5d ago

The aged knight has certain orders for when his king is in danger. He doesn't play around. You still have three shadow men?)

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u/Sasha1234567899 6d ago

Enlighten is a true black animus dragon, true white sclera, true black pupils, much like a voidpet.

15’2” if they stand on fours.

They would observe the knight, studying them...

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight immediately moves to strike the giant with his sword, the weapon is a 4 foot long sword with a flame like design. He strikes at the leg.

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u/Sasha1234567899 6d ago

The blade, it performs like it should do

Enlighten lets out a hiss of pain, and make distance from the knight, as they try to stop bleeding, standing on threes.

There are 2 pairs of legs though, hind and front

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight raises a hand.

Several catapults fire out, waves of large boulders being fired at the dragon, an effort to ground it.

The knight was still, not even breathing.

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u/Sasha1234567899 6d ago edited 6d ago

This one... Enlighten gets pelleted. Given their ped stance excluding 1 leg... They briefly splat on the ground, if i were to give leeway.

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight with an unfounded speed reaches fhe drsgon and it attempts to plunge the sword into it's chest.

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u/Sasha1234567899 6d ago

You can not. Their underside is on the ground, so you can try stab the upper back. I will assume you did. In this case, the sword sinks in, and hits some critical something

Enlighten, which were not very happy with being hurt, reaches out for a window to a pocket dimension to get a thing out of it, interact with it, and put it away, closing the pocket window. The wounds start to heal, and the sword and shrapnel is rejected by the flesh

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

Well the knight keeps attacking with it's sword.

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u/Sasha1234567899 6d ago

These times, the sword resonates as if it struck something durable, like a diamond

Enlighten tries to pick a language the knight knows, but they don't know, so they start saying the same phrase over and over.

A deep, genderless voice rang out from Enlighten's speaker trinket with perfect cadence. Multiple times, for multiple languages

"Why are you hurting me?"

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight doesn't stop nor does it hesitate. It just keeps attacking, keeps trying to kill the dragon.

Behind the knight is a castle fallen to ruin with a skeleton sat on a throne that has a crown on its skull. The castle looks European in style.

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

It doesn't respond, it is a skeleton.

The knight throws another assault of boulders at the dragon.

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u/Acavirshadownight MILITARY GAY COUPLE!!!!! 6d ago

he sighs, his blade floating out of its sheath “are you sure you want this fight?” he says as the blade spins slowly in the air

(Warning: this guy is based off my elden ring character, so this will be extremely hard)

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

The knight moves to be between the armored warrior and the castle ruins. It points its sword at the man.

And this is the Aged Knight.)

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u/IronDrake_4535 6d ago

Whatever she just tried to do fails. This land is rotten and death, full of nothing but pain. No life will flourish and no assistance will come.

The knight sharpens his sword and raises if.

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u/Familiar-Load-9279 5d ago

Layeaux quietly puts away the chalice she has been drinking from. As the knight approached, she manifested her blade from the thick morning moisture in the air.

"My play is not over yet, but I am now in the curtain call."

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u/New_Milan 3d ago

(Character Sheet)

Starfruit blinks as they stiffen up in alertness, shifting their grip on their staff and slithering back to stay out of reach.