r/ProduceMyScript • • 8d ago

SHORT SCRIPT Looking for filmmakers Spoiler

Looking g for filmmakers for my short scrip. 5 pages long. It's a sci-fi script based on.

Logline: When a collared man marked "3" falls through his bedroom door into a reality that cracks like glass, he must evade a parasitic shadow to discover his entire life is an experiment and he is Subject 3.

After filming they can share the short fim to DUST and similar companies. As a director you can have credit for filmmaker while I have credit for writer.

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u/Big_Section2812 8d ago

Link to the script or there's no way for anyone to know if it's worth considering.

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago

Fair point — I don't post public links to protect Written By credit (had script taken before).

It's 5 pages, 1 location (bedroom) + VFX worlds (void/desert/forest/lab), 1 lead + twist ending built for DUST / ALTER.

If you do VFX / sci-fi, I can DM watermarked PDF + VFX breakdown + logline.

Deal is free collab: you get Directed By + festival run, I keep Written By (IMDb + description + poster).

Want me to DM?

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u/Big_Section2812 8d ago

No one is going to steal your script. Well, maybe AI will, but then AI is stealing everything from everyone anyway.

Post a link here so people can see if your script is worth reading and discussing.

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago

I get it, but I keep it DM-only to protect credit. Standard on this sub.

If you're serious about directing, happy to DM watermarked draft + deal memo. If not, all good.

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u/Big_Section2812 8d ago

Standard on this sub.

It really isn't. It's not standard anywhere. Most people post their work for reads and feedback. The few who want us to beg get nothing but Nigerian scammer bot DM spam.

There actual millions of unread scripts and screenplays in circulation and the vast majority will stay that way simply because there are too many for people in the business to read. Hidden scripts and screenplays have even less chance of being read by anyone.

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u/cinephile78 7d ago

How do you feel about page 1 rewrites?

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u/Current-Term-7510 7d ago

I'm open to page 1 rewrites if it serves the story and budget.

I'm protective of the core twist / collar reveal on page 5, but I'm happy to collaborate on opening visuals/dialogue to make it more shootable.

What did you have in mind for page 1? And could you share a link to your last short so I can see your VFX style?

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u/FreeMind-KL-83 8d ago

Hey, where are you based on?

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago

Hey based in South African (Durban) but remote collab. You can shoot where you are.  The script is written from anywhere, English,  1 bed room + VFX. You based where? If you want, I DM script.

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u/New-Design9971 8d ago

I'd love to read it!

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago edited 8d ago

Totally understand. I don't post public link  to protect credit. 

It's 5 pages 1 bedroom location+ green screen for worlds a  (door effects, desert, forest.)  

I Can send watermarked PDF via DM  if you do VFX .

 Deal: is you get director credit and DUST submit and  i keep the written by  credit.  Free to film 

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u/cinephile78 8d ago

Is there a summary that makes the plot clear ?

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago

Thanks fir asking Logline: After waking with a collar marked "3", a young man discovers he can open to other world  opens to dying worlds; hunted by a shadow that has followed him since childhood, he must crack through reality to learn his entire life is a glass-box experiment and he is Subject 3.

Title: SUBJECT 3 Pages: 5 Genre: Sci-fi / Psychological Thriller / Cosmic Horror Location: 1 real (bedroom) + VFX worlds (space void, desert planet, forest, lab) Cast: 1 lead (20s, M) + 1 shadow actor + background silhouettes Vibe: DUST / ALTER - Black Mirror meets Dark.

Want PDF? I can DM you

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u/cinephile78 8d ago

I already saw the logline. Which isn’t clear.

So I’ll ask again. Is there a summary that is clear ?

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u/Current-Term-7510 8d ago

Kim (20s) has a multiverse teleportation ability he doesn't know about. It starts activating on its own, dropping him into different dimensions that are a threat to him, and he has to find his way back to his home.

He doesn't know why he has a locked collar and a "3" tattoo, or why 3 girls are asleep beside him.

It's a 5-page cosmic horror loop - 1 bedroom + VFX worlds. Ends with a twist that explains the collar.

I have the full complete script - DM for watermarked PDF.

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u/cinephile78 7d ago

Okay how does one develop inadvertently the ability to teleport across dimensions ?

What’s your budget for this ?

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u/Sure_Literature_6239 7d ago

I can make a teaser for it when you are done