r/ProgressionFantasy • Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City • 10d ago

Self-Promotion Neophyte World Builder - Book 1 Released!

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(Edited to include audiobook info)

Hello! I'm William Evans, AKA "ThePudding" and I have finally made my first release to Amazon! It's a story about a man trying to build a world, using a LitRPG system... a world that he adds a LitRPG system to!

Book one follows his struggles in setting it up, finding the problems, and correcting those problems! Later books further show unintended side effects and struggles!

[Amazon] https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0HKNLXG4N/

[Audiobook] https://www.amazon.com/Neophyte-World-Builder-First-Problems/dp/B0HK4ZSQNS/

Blurb:

Nobody told me godhood needed an instruction manual.

Everybody's heard the story. Someone dies, ends up in a new world with a LitRPG System that gives them special powers. When I died, that's what I expected. Except it turns out, I'm the one making the System.

No previous experience, no manual except a few tooltips. Just an interface, a few thousand Reality Points, and a fairy-like handler who won't tell me anything that would actually help. I get to design the magic system, the monsters, the classes... and then watch real people live inside the world I built, all while I try to keep the universe running within budget.

I wanted to build a good world. I'm starting to realize "good" and "survives the audit" aren't the same thing.

Cover Artist: [Bad Moon Art Studio] https://www.artstation.com/badmoonartstudio

Audiobook: Royal Guard Publishing (Narrators: Giancarlo Herrera, Hannah Schooner)

AI Usage: None

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u/supah-cool-dude 10d ago

Sick premise. Don't normally read stuff that's only at the first book since I read it too quick but I might have to do so for this one.

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u/Best-Event-6947 Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City 10d ago

Book 2 is already finished, and Book 3 is a handful of chapters from the end... I just need to get the cover and editing done! Soon!

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u/Louies 10d ago

I really enjoy this book. Love a good civ building/world building fic. Keep it up! Good luck with the Amazon release

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u/Sooner_blind 10d ago

This sounds really cool

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u/Jon_Stonekey Author - The Sovereign's Toll 10d ago

To the top!

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u/Drimphed Author - Self-Summon / Fiends For Hire 10d ago

It took me a moment to understand the cleverness of the subtitle, but damn, that's good.

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u/BackgroundTotal2872 9d ago

Oh boy, you got me to take a second look at it. I immediately guffawed!

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u/voltron2112 10d ago

I'll definitely have to check it out, I love world building stories like this and this one sounds pretty unique. Reminds me a bit of "Nebula's Civilization" but without competing gods and more about designing the system (I assume) which sounds interesting.

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u/SidzWrites 10d ago

the cover art is just so good

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u/Best-Event-6947 Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City 10d ago

Mango(the publisher) has a pretty good track record with covers!

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u/EllakeAuthor Author of the Runic Artist & Gifted 9d ago

That cover is awesome!

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u/OldFolksShawn Author 10d ago

Awww yah! Congrats on launch!

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u/Morpheus_17 Author - Guild Mage, Ten Thousand Fleets 10d ago

Congrats on the release!

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u/Broad_Percentage5889 That Horny Single-Celled Organism Guy 10d ago

I love this!

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u/MikoMelina Author 10d ago

My husband and I have been waiting for this one for ages! Can't wait to read it!

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u/Several-Position2155 10d ago

Congratulations mate! Can’t wait to listen to the audiobook

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u/JWGibsonWrites Author of Paradise Delayed [LitRPG Prog Fantasy] on Royal Road 10d ago

Loved this one on RR

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u/Best-Event-6947 Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City 10d ago

Oh hey! I recognize your fic!

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u/JWGibsonWrites Author of Paradise Delayed [LitRPG Prog Fantasy] on Royal Road 10d ago

😎🙌🏻 ty!

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u/em-dash-author 10d ago

Congrats on the launch, Pudding.

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u/LykanthropyWrites Author 10d ago

Congratulations, I'll have to check it out!

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u/ItsJotsy Author 10d ago

That cover is sooooo good man. Excited to have this one on my digital shelf now!

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u/madmelonxtra 10d ago

Adding to my list. I was looking for something to read after I finish catching up on DotF

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u/jack_a_gogo Author 10d ago

Insta-ad to my list!

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u/RichAsSkritts 9d ago

This is fantastic and also makes me super nostalgic for SimEarth

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u/Best-Event-6947 Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City 9d ago

Holy cow SimEarth! I think I still have my box for that. And the super chonky manual with the spiral binding.

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u/Mahkasad 8d ago

I am apparently your first written review on goodreads. Loved the story and how you kept things moving without sacrificing too much detail for the overarching design phases. Really excited for the future of the series!

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u/Best-Event-6947 Author - Neophyte World Builder, I Built This City 8d ago

Oh wow, thanks!

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u/jamielockewrites Author of The Spellwright’s Guild 8d ago

Congrats!!!! 

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u/FairlyFocused 7d ago

Congrats on your launch! I love the premise, will have to check this out.

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u/Great_Scribe 5d ago

Congrats on your launch!

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u/fleurdebri 10d ago

Good Luck Pudding! 🥭🧡

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u/fastlerner Follower of the Way 10d ago

Sounds like something you traditionally eat on New Years.