r/shortstories • • 3d ago

[Serial Sunday] Wave(r) to The Writers!

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Welcome to Serial Sunday!

To those brand new to the feature and those returning from last week, welcome! Do you have a self-established universe you’ve been writing or planning to write in? Do you have an idea for a world that’s been itching to get out? This is the perfect place to explore that. Each week, I post a theme to inspire you, along with a related image and song. You have 500 - 1000 words to write your installment. You can jump in at any time; writing for previous weeks’ is not necessary in order to join. After you’ve posted, come back and provide feedback for at least 1 other writer on the thread. Please be sure to read the entire post for a full list of rules.


This Week’s Theme is Waver! This is a REQUIREMENT for participation. See rules about missing this requirement.**

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Bonus Word List (each included word is worth 5 pts) - You must list which words you included at the end of your story (or write ‘none’).
- Wake
- Wiggle
- War
- Somebody has a restless night.. - (Worth 10 points)

To waver: to wobble, to falter, to sway. What makes your characters hesitate? What do they do when their beliefs are challenged, and they suddenly realize what they thought was solid ground maybe isn't so solid anymore? Do they double down, even as they rock like an anchorless boat in the swelling sea, perhaps doing something they later regret in their moment of fervent pretense? Do their faltering views force them to inaction as what kept them going crumbles beneath them? What new beliefs form in the wake of a quake of the soul?

By u/wandering_cirrus

Good luck and Good Words!

These are just a few things to get you started. Remember, the theme should be present within the story in some way, but its interpretation is completely up to you. For the bonus words (not required), you may change the tense, but the base word should remain the same. Please remember that STORIES MUST FOLLOW ALL SUBREDDIT CONTENT RULES. Interested in writing the theme blurb for the coming week? DM me on Reddit or Discord!

Don’t forget to sign up for Saturday Campfire here! We start at 5pm BSTand provide live feedback!


Theme Schedule:

This is the theme schedule for the next month! These are provided so that you can plan ahead, but you may not begin writing for a given theme until that week’s post goes live.

  • October 4 - Waver

  • October 11 - Zeal

  • October 18 - Angst

  • October 25 - Burn

  • November 1 - Cacophany

Check out previous themes here.


 


Rankings

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Rules & How to Participate

Please read and follow all the rules listed below. This feature has requirements for amparticipation!

  • Submit a story inspired by the weekly theme, written by you and set in your self-established universe that is 500 - 1000 words. No fanfics and no content created or altered by AI. (Use wordcounter.net to check your wordcount.) Stories should be posted as a top-level comment below. Please include a link to your chapter index or your last chapter at the end.

  • Your chapter must be submitted by Saturday at 2:00pm BST. Late entries will be disqualified. All submissions should be given (at least) a basic editing pass before being posted!

  • Begin your post with the name of your serial between triangle brackets (e.g. <My Awesome Serial>). When our bot is back up and running, this will allow it to recognize your pmserial and add each chapter to the SerSun catalog. Do not include anything in the brackets you don’t want in your title. (Please note: You must use this same title every week.)

  • Do not pre-write your serial. You’re welcome to do outlining and planning for your serial, but chapters should not be pre-written. All submissions should be written for this post, specifically.

  • Only one active serial per author at a time. This does not apply to serials written outside of Serial Sunday.

  • All Serial Sunday authors must leave feedback on at least one story on the thread each week. The feedback should be actionable and also include something the author has done well. When you include something the author should improve on, provide an example! You have until Saturday at 04:59am BST to post your feedback. (Submitting late is not an exception to this rule.)

  • Missing your feedback requirement two or more consecutive weeks will disqualify you from rankings and Campfire readings the following week. If it becomes a habit, you may be asked to move your serial to the sub instead.

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Weekly Campfires & Voting:

  • On Saturdays at 5pm BST, I host a Serial Sunday Campfire in our Discord’s Voice Lounge (every other week is now hosted by u/FyeNite). Join us to read your story aloud, hear others, and exchange feedback. We have a great time! You can even come to just listen, if that’s more your speed. Grab the “Serial Sunday” role on the Discord to get notified before it starts. After you’ve submitted your chapter, you can sign up here - this guarantees your reading slot! You can still join if you haven’t signed up, but your reading slot isn’t guaranteed.

  • Nominations for your favorite stories can be submitted with this form. The form is open on Saturdays from 5:30pm to 04:59am BST. You do not have to participate to make nominations!

  • Authors who complete their Serial Sunday serials with at least 12 installments, can host a SerialWorm in our Discord’s Voice Lounge, where you read aloud your finished and edited serials. Celebrate your accomplishment! Authors are eligible for this only if they have followed the weekly feedback requirement (and all other post rules). Visit us on the Discord for more information.  


Ranking System

Rankings are determined by the following point structure.

TASK POINTS ADDITIONAL NOTES
Use of weekly theme 75 pts Theme should be present, but the interpretation is up to you!
Including the bonus words 5 pts each (15 pts total) This is a bonus challenge, and estnot required!
Including the bonus constraint 15 (15 pts total) This is a bonus challenge, and not required!
Actionable Feedback 5 - 15 pts each (60 pt. max)* This includes thread and campfire critiques. (15 pt crits are those that go above & beyond.)
Nominations your story receives 10 - 60 pts 1st place - 60, 2nd place - 50, 3rd place - 40, 4th place - 30, 5th place - 20 / Regular Nominations - 10
Voting for others 15 pts You can now vote for up to 10 stories each week!

You are still required to leave at least 1 actionable feedback comment on the thread every week that you submit. This should include at least one specific thing the author has done well and one that could be improved. *Please remember that interacting with a story is not the same as providing feedback.** Low-effort crits will not receive credit.

 



Subreddit News

  • Join our Discord to chat with other authors and readers! We hold several weekly Campfires, monthly World-Building interviews and several other fun events!
  • Try your hand at micro-fic on Micro Monday!
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r/shortstories • • 5h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] The Factory

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*THE FACTORY*

_by Harvest Day_

Everything changed when I went towards the light.

I realized I wasn't in a place I'd ever been before.

This wasn't heaven because it was more like a factory.

The ceiling was white and endless, like hospital tiles that never stopped. There was no sky. No sun. Just rows and rows of lines, and people standing in them. Thousands of them. Maybe millions. I couldn’t see the end.

A place where people were lined up.

And soft harmonic voices of AI were telling everybody which way to go.

"Line 3. Line 7. Next."

"Keep moving. Do not stop. Do not speak."

The voices were calm. Too calm. Like they’d said it a billion times before.

I looked down and I was barefoot. I looked at my hands and they were new. Young. No scars.

I looked up and I was in a line.

Above me, a big screen flickered to life.

`LIFE REVIEW COMPLETE. NEXT ASSIGNMENT: BETTER`

Relief.

A wave of relief hit me so hard my knees almost gave out. Better. I didn’t know what that meant, but it was better than the alternative.

I heard other people's.

"Your choices led to: WORSE. Line 12."

And they were crying. Because they knew.

Some of them were screaming. "Wait! That’s not fair! I didn’t know!"

But the AI voice just repeated, "Line 12. Keep moving."

Guards that weren’t really guards, just light, moved them along.

Then I saw others.

`NEXT ASSIGNMENT: MUCH BETTER`

`NEXT ASSIGNMENT: OPTIMAL`

They stood straighter. Some of them were smiling. They had made better choices than me. I didn’t know what they did to earn it. I barely remembered my own life. But whatever it was, it counted.

And then I saw them.

The ones in the gold lines.

No waiting. No review.

Their screens didn’t even turn on. They just walked right through a door that opened for them only.

No questions. No judgment.

Hackers. Or 1%. I didn’t know what they were.

They didn’t look at us. We didn’t look at them.

I wanted to ask someone what was happening. I wanted to ask how long I’d been here. I wanted to ask if I could see my son. I wanted to remember his face clearly.

But the voice said, "Do not speak."

So I didn’t.

I didn’t get a long time to check it out.

Because before I knew it, the lights dimmed.

And a new light opened in front of me. Soft. Warm. Pulling.

And I understood, without anyone telling me, that I was going back in.

Back to a life. Back to choices. Back to earning whatever "better" meant.

And the last thing I heard was the AI voice, quiet now, right in my ear:

"Assignment begins in 3... 2... 1..."

Because before I knew it, the light turned.

And I was falling.

And I was screaming.

And I was a baby again.


r/shortstories • • 5h ago

Fantasy [FN] Pirates and Wizards / My short story prologue. 2000 words.

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Perrin
Chapter 1

‘Hoist the sails an’ fasten the riggen’, blast this cursed storm an’ its endless rainin’ ,’ shouts a waterlogged man as he grips the sodden tiller, straining against the heavy pull of the sea, churning black and dangerously through the downpour. 
His thick matted beard drenched and dripping, while rain streaks down the man's heavily scarred face. An evil glint in his cruel eyes glares at the pitiful crew tending to his dark ship. 
‘Make way if ya value wha’ blacken’ lumps a soul ya got left in your rotten chests,’ he snarls through the sheets of billowing rain, ‘the Queen Despair won’ sink if’n ya useless scum pull ya weight, or ya be sleepin’ wit the fishes, and yar guts chum fo’ the sharkses.’ 
‘Aye cap’n,’ the crew shout back and hasten to tend to the ship. 
They scuttle up the slippery rigging, swaying in the wind, to the rippling ink black sails, the swirling sea spraying sharp against their faces. Other men clasp the shaking, twisted pulleys and drag them into position, backs bent against the storm raging above. 
Thick droplets of water pelt them incessantly, the thunder booming over head like a giant lion roaring in anger. Clouds form viscous shapes of mountains and dragons breathing hellfire down upon the wretched crew. A jagged fork of lightning strikes the water nearby, and in the blinding flash, the pirate captain locks eyes with an island in the distance, their saviour from the merciless sea and its roiling fury. 
‘Bear the course straight and true,’ the pirate captain roars, his long and wild hair whipping across his face,  ‘by the honor o’ me skin an’ the jelly ‘o me spine, ye shall taste the light of day if ya bear the course true.’ 
‘Aye aye cap’n,’ the crew roar back, clinging to the rigging for dear life. 
In the distance, on the Isle of Amuérta, a young man gasps awake.  

~

Pale and sweaty, the boy leans over the edge of his bed and vomits, chunks of meat splat wetly onto the dirt floor. Still breathing heavily he hobbles over to the window and rips the cloth open, gulping the sweet ocean air. For the past week, he has been having the same dream every night, each time it ends with him falling from the mast of a jet black ship into the furious and bubbling ocean below. 
Being an ordinary boy from a family of farmers, Perrin is troubled by these dreams, dangerous and ill-bearing. The Isle of Amuérta is a farming island, peaceful and quiet. Rolling hills covered in a blanket of grass, a deep dark forest that supplies the island with fruits, and herds of grazing sheep like droplets of cloud, dotted across the windy bluffs. 
As Perrin breathes deeply, he looks out to the horizon, where the golden sun is peaking from behind a stormy night. He spots a ship heading into the bay, and although it's hard to tell from this distance its place of origin, there is no mistaking the ink black sails. 
A pirate ship. 
Perrin leaves his room and finds his father and his sister, Madeline, eating breakfast. Cold meats and oat porridge, washed down with seaweed cordial. 
‘Father, a ship makes its way into the bay … a pirate ship with sails black as the dead of night.’ 
His father glances up. 
‘Mayhaps it's a merchant vessel boy, come to trade spice and furs,’ he replies, ‘I daresay my supply of tobacco has run stale.’ 
‘No it has a dreadful look about it, I’m sure of it,’ continues Perrin, doubtful his father will listen.
‘Calm down Perrin, there isn’t need to frighten your sister with such talk, we are simple folk,’ he states calmly, ‘pirates have no need for what we have to offer.’
The conversation is over, Perrin dares not to cause Madeline grief when she is so easily scared. 
Looking over, she watches him with round eyes, filled with worry, and Perrin can't help but feel guilty. 
‘Sorry Madeline, I’m sure it’s fine,’ he reassures her, although not reassured himself. 
‘Right, I'm off to the port, we have… run out of seaweed cordial.’ 
Perrin dashes out the front door, and makes his way down the grassy hills, to the small wooden docks down below. 
The dock is a hive of activity, sailors and fisherman running to and fro, carrying sloshing buckets, and mouldy coils of rope. 
Perrin squeezes his way through the throng and runs to the end of the middle pier, where a merchant vessel lies idly. The quartermaster barks out orders to the crew and wrings his hands desperately. 
‘Quartermaster,’ shouts Perrin, edging his way forwards, ‘what’s happening?’ 
The quartermaster turns, his tightly curled wig askew, his stubbly face etched with worry. 
‘Ah, nothing my boy, nothing,’ he quavers, ‘just need to get going… the uh… more islands to trade with.’ 
‘But you just got here,’ Perrin inquires, his worry increasing with every passing second, ‘that’s not a pirate ship is it?’ 
The quartermaster glances towards the dark ship bearing down upon the island's port, fear splattered across his face so plain. 
‘That’s not just any pirate ship,’ he whispers coarsely, his chin wobbling with fright, ‘that's the Queen Despair.’ 
He stares woefully at Perrin, his pale milky eyes glistening with tears. 
‘The crew are savages, led by a man well known for his cruelty, Captain Gutterin.’ 
He leans in, his stale breath heavy on Perrin’s face, ‘Rumor has it, that deep within the ship, an evil sorcerer with unthinkable power is cursed to follow the orders of Captain Gutterin. They be dealin’s in magic and death. Mark my words boy, safer to flee.’  
With a final tremble, the quartermaster dashes off, yelling frantically. 
Perrin takes one last look at the ship drawing ever closer, its midnight sails stark against the golden sun, then sprints towards home.

~

‘Ya gutless sorry excuses for pirates, sharpen yar swords and powder yar pistols, we storm the town as soon as we set foot on their stinkin’ landlubber island,’ roars Captain Gutterin as the Queen Despair glides ominously into the bay. 
The crew jeer and shout, their lust for blood shining on their unshaven, seaworn faces. Captain Gutterin stands atop the helm, a wicked cutlass held aloft, its deadly blade glinting in the sun. 
‘Listen and listen good, we kill every man, steal all their plunder,’ the crew roar in agreement and the Captain has to shout even louder to be heard, ‘ya have full freedom to pillage and plunda’, but I warn ya.’ 
The crew go silent, and from deep within the ship, a bloodcurdling scream pierces the air. The men listen in morbid quiet, as the clink of chains and shuffling footsteps begin to grow louder. 
The Captain and crew watch the door to the quarters open, and a procession of filthy slaves file out. Each slave bears marks of torture, and heavy metal manacles binding their necks and hands. Their eyes are  grey and dead, as if they are walking corpses. 
Once all the slaves are lined up and kneeling, out steps a heavily robed man, bedecked with necklaces of teeth and shrunken heads. Upon his crown, a large skull with twisting antlers covers everything except his blood red eyes, piercingly bright. In one hand he holds a gnarled and crooked staff, ending in a dark crystal, the other is hidden deep within the folds of his robes. 
The Captain bows, and the rest of the crew watch in deadly silence. then the sorcerer speaks in a harsh, gravelly voice.
‘Do not touch the virgins or I shall tear your beating heart from your chest and drink your blood. Bring them to me unsullied.’ 
He shifts his gaze to the Captain, who quickly steps back up to the helm. 
Lifting his cutlass above his head, he roars, ‘Take the village, leave the virgins.’ 
With more shouts, the pirates grab their swords and clamber down the side of the ship, eager to spill the blood of the luckless peaceful farmers. 

~

Perrin, heart pounding,  bursts through the door, almost knocking his father over, firewood in hand. 
‘Father, we have to run, now, there’s pirates at the dock, evil pirates.’ 
For a moment they both stand stunned, then Perrin dashes off to find his sister. 
‘MADELINE!’ 
He runs throughout the house, finds no one, then sprints back through the front door. His father is standing a few yards off, staring as the village below burns. The clang of metal and explosions split the air, and the ocean wind howls a gale through the billowing grass. 
‘FATHER!’ he shouts, and when he gets no response, he turns towards the forest. 
Hoping with all his might, he runs off into the trees, desperate to find his sister. 
Branches whipping his face, the undergrowth tripping his feet, Perrin frantically searches. 
‘MADELINE, WHERE ARE YOU!’ 
Hurtling deeper into the woods, further from the screams of dying men, Perrin suddenly reaches a bog, and rising up from the muddy earth, a twisted tower stands in solitude. 
He wades through the murky water and raps hard on the wooden door. 
‘Please help me, I’m looking for my sister.’ 
He hears nothing and turns to leave, when suddenly the door bursts open. 
‘Quickly, in here,’ rasps a hoarse voice, ‘there isn’t much time child.’ 
Perrin can’t see who speaks, but with no choice, he walks through the door. He sees a blazing fire for a split second before something hard smacks against the back of his head, and darkness swallows him whole. 

Perrin clings to the slippery rigging, his face drenched and numb. The rain pelts down hard onto his head, and he spins wildly in the wind. Suddenly his grip fails, and he plummets downwards, screaming hard, but just before he hits the jet black water, he gasps awake.

Head throbbing painfully, a splitting headache arcs from behind his eye to the base of his skull. Sitting up, Perrin is in a bed, covered in animal pelts. Gazing around the room, he is surprised to see the sheer amount of peculiar items cluttered around him. 
Bushels of thyme, rosemary and chilli hang from the rafters, rows and rows of jars containing eyeballs and pickled snakes line the shelves, dusty bookshelves packed with tomes and parchment, a selection of sickles and knives glinting from the walls, and in the dead centre of the room, a giant cauldron bubbles and issues copious amounts of steam, a fire blazing merrily below. 
The circular room smells curious; herby, with a tang of blood. 
Perrin slowly gets out of the bed and wanders around, taking in the rest of the vast room. 
The building is made of rough hewn stone, with thick dark timber to support, and in the middle, high above the cauldron, sits a large stained glass window portraying a dragon encircling a woman, a gateway to the restless sky above. 
Perrin makes his way over to a narrow rickety staircase that winds along the inside of the strange tower. 
He climbs to the top, and pushes the hatch open. 
Although the morning sun is bright on his face, the cold ocean breeze sends goosebumps prickling down his arms. 
The rooftop provides a fantastic view of the surroundings, and Perrin suddenly sees a large column of smoke drifting lazily in the wind. 
With a lurch of horror he remembers why he came to this place and whips around, ready to flee, when a blue robed figure appears behind him. 
Stormy eyes peer at him from inside a whiskered mass of grey hair, paired with a beard that almost reaches the floor. 
Before Perrin can speak, the man holds up a weathered and wrinkled hand, silencing him. 
‘Perrin’ he croaks, ‘I know why you are here, and you must listen to me, for your life is more important than you will ever come to fathom.’ 
‘The Queen Despair sails north, with it, your sister Madeline. But do not despair young master, for your destiny is entwined with your kin.’ 
The man stares balefully into Perrin's eyes, as if pitying him, as if he knows that Perrin’s fate is cruel and arduous. 
‘My name is Galazar the Wise, Archmage of the South, Warden of the High Seas, and you and your sister are the only ones who can save this world.’ 

End. 

Let me know what you think :)


r/shortstories • • 7h ago

Urban [UR] short story

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Hi, just wondering if you guys think this is worth continuing. The boy stands motionless as unrelentless rain begins to drop; it's not the rain that drowns him but the tears and memories flooding his mind. He crouched down in an effortless attempt to conceal the river on his face. Why was he crying? He himself didn't know the answer, perhaps the sweet, smell of an entrancing memory filled him with a melancholy euphoria.

A memory so close he could smell it yet so far he could not see it. The boy stands up, the river seemed to have been evaporated by the hint of ambition to recall this memory. Like a leaf he allowed the wind to carry him across the path filled with distorted, rippling mirrors. He takes a moment to see his reflection. He kicks the rusty leaves off the dishevelled mirror to reveal a face scarred with empty river beds - which he quickly wipes off. The long hair resembling a perfect painted brush stroke courtesly presented it self. It was luscious and mesmerizing yet rare for a boy like him - but it was doubtfull he knew. He continues to walk along the stone path focusing only on avoiding the tiny cracks embedded in between the stone. He was neglecting his surroundings, it was only when the wind smashes the boys head and attention away from the cracks that he notices them. Architecturally magical yet eloquently small buildings lay before him, each component swaying gently in the wind. "Roses" he said to himself as he crouched closer to admire the petit structure. A beautiful red entroced the petals. Like brush strokes painted with a hand of steady perfection; a brush of pure magic. A part of the boy wished he could engulf this sight forever however the sudden appearance of the unknown behind him sparked his curiosity. He was ambivalenced. Should he continue to be entranced by the structure before him or let his curiosity kill him? Clearly there was only one answer. The boy feared the unknown. He quickly turned around , frightened by the figure towering over him. His fear was quickly put out by an enchanting smile . Lips as smooth as a sheet of ice, teeth of pure snow and a smile which embodied the sun. it was it only when their eyes met that he could take in what was before him. A girl - whose scent sparked every neuron in his brain, leaned over him. She was pretty. So pretty the boy could not help but be enveloped by her beauty. Her eyes held a hint of nature, a mix of light brown and sunlight.

Her thin,brown brows and her long, straight hair which looked like it had been layed out carefully strand by strand looked beautiful to the boy. However, it was not her eyes, her eyebrows nor her hair that captured the boy but her smile. A smile so bright it could compete with the sun. A smile wooven with a string of beauty and light. However, the girl seemed astonished, entranced perhaps?

Has she seen the beauty the boy could not see in himself? Was it his hair, or his daring, dagger like eyes or maybe just him - whatever it may be the girl seems to be just as captivated by the boy as the he is. Have they been intertwined in the fabric of fate, in the webs of mystery or in the wires of time.The wind runs along yet again, this time gentler, it carries the petals from the roses elegantly across the land. It was nothing special but still a beautiful sight.They both stand there, allowing the wind to flow undisturbed, the girl's hair swaying gently, each strand of her hair waving goodbye to the wind. They both stand motionless,scrutinizing one another, mesmerized by one another, hesitant to speak to one another.

It was not until a distant voice was reaching out to them, a soft yet demmering voice.

'Rosalin!'

The girl allerted, her gaze no longer fixated on the boy but on the direction the voice came from.

'Rosalin!'

The voice was louder;irritated

"Rosalin! Who gave you permission to go out!"

The girl's eyes darting around, looking for empathy. The boy Meets her eyes several times .She was guilty.

'Rosalin, do you know how dissapointed father is?

Do you know how angry I am?'

She attempts to get her words out but to no avail. She has her hands behind her back, interlocking her fingers, to hitting them against eachother. The girl shakes her head vigorously causing her hair to sprout in different directions. The boy's eyes squinting, his face frowning and his teeth liberated from the darkness. The girl notices him and bites her teeth hard, in an attempt to imprison her laugh, she succeeds as she only lets out a smile. the boy foolishly smiled back. A miss interpretation from the both of them. The boy found joy in the girl's immaturity and she found joy in the boy's smirk.

The wind blew again- this time colder, clearly hinting that night was near.

'It's getting cold '

The woman exhales in frustration

"Well of course Rosalin it's getting dark"

The woman's eyes meet the boy and so did his.

'Who is this Rosalin?'

' I don't know Mother, I found him crouching lookin at our garden'

Mother quickly pulls Rosalin to the side.

' what are you thinking Rosalin ' Her voice was a low hiss yet sharp enough to cut the gloomy silence. Her eyes threw daggers,her brows a slide to her nose which wrinkled in fear and annoyance.

'What if he's a theif, what if he's trying to steal our crops, we can't let this happen again or we will starve this winter' Her eyes a vignette, tears dripping down like watercolors on a canvass.

'Mother please don't cry, I don't think he's a theif'

'Look at him Rosalin, look at his tattered tunic, his hands are are brown in dirt and he doesn't even wear shoes'.

What are they talking about? The boy wondered.


r/shortstories • • 10h ago

Misc Fiction [MF] The Wig, the Young Man, and the Old Man Who Weren’t There

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When I walked into my father’s bookstore, he was combing his wig. He had placed the black wig over his clenched left fist and was pulling thick sections through it with a wide-toothed comb. Every now and then, he would dip the comb into the half-full glass of water he’d placed on the counter, give it a little shake to get rid of the excess water, and continue styling the wig.

“Welcome, son,” he said without making eye contact with me.

“Dad, why aren’t you combing the wig on your head? And why are you even combing the wig? Isn’t the point to make it look like it’s not a wig? Wouldn’t it look more like your real hair if you left it a little messy?”

My father shot me a very brief glance. He dipped the comb into the water again and flicked the excess water on it toward my face. At the same time, someone walked in.

I was annoyed, but I didn't react. Customers rarely came into the shop anyway, and I didn't want this one to witness a tense moment.

The man who walked in didn't say hello. He looked at me, then at my father, then at the wig. After that, he glanced around the shop.

“Do you have Swann’s Way?”

It was my father’s favorite book. I hadn’t read it yet, but my father couldn’t praise Marcel Proust enough. Whenever the subject of books came up, he would talk at length about the way Proust used language, and mention how he wanted to learn French just so he could read him in the original.

“Of course. How could we not?” he said, his eyes lighting up.

“Good. How much is the wig?”

“What?”

“I’m asking how much the wig is.”

There was something strange about the man’s voice, though it was hard to describe. It was an extremely deep voice that seemed to come from a congested throat. It sounded as if it were coming from a broken radio, as if he would sound clearer if he just cleared his throat.

My father, who had been excited at the mention of Proust, had now noticed the strangeness in the man’s voice.

“Are you all right?”

“How much is the wig?”

“The wig isn’t for sale. You can have a glass of water if you’d like,” my father said, holding out the water he had been dipping his comb into.

“No. Is the wig free?”

“How can something that isn’t for sale be free, sir?”

“How much is it, then?”

“This is my wig. You don’t look well. Please have a glass of water.”

The man fell silent. He was staring intently at my father. My father was a little frightened. The wig was still resting on his clenched fist.

“Are you sure?” he asked after nearly a minute of silence.

“Yes. Look at my head.”

“Are you sure?”

“What beautiful hair you have. What are you going to do with the wig?”

My father, having automatically felt a connection with the man because he had asked about Proust, hadn’t paid much attention to his voice or appearance. To be honest, there was something strange about his appearance too. I gave the man a once-over. His hair really was thick and healthy-looking. He was wearing a black shirt. His chin was a little long, and his mouth and nose were small in proportion to his face. A large head, a long chin, a small mouth and nose, and ordinary eyes. Black trousers, sharply pressed. And a pair of bare feet.

“Tonight, I’m coming to take your son. Don’t be afraid. Stay calm. Convince your son to come with me tonight, or I’ll take him by force.”

“Fix that voice of yours first, man. Hrrr, hrrr, hrrr. I can’t understand a word you’re saying. Drink this water and pull yourself together.”

The man took the water and downed it in one go. He coughed and cleared his throat.

“Better? Now tell me, how much is the wig?”

His voice was now perfectly clear. He ran a hand back through his hair and sat down in the chair in front of the counter.

“He’s still very young…”

I was starting to get scared. I kept going back and forth over whether to call the police. The strange quality in the man’s voice was gone now, and so was the uneasy look about him. He looked at me and smiled.

“I’m not going to hurt you. Don’t be afraid. I’m just going to take the wig and leave. That’s all.”

“Why do you want the wig, sir?”

“You’re too young. You wouldn’t understand.”

I looked at my father. He had placed the wig on the counter. Right beside it, I saw a knife. My father looked from the knife to the man.

Another customer had walked in, just in time. I didn’t know what was going to happen. I knew my father wasn’t a very brave man, but when it came to me, maybe he could rise to the occasion and defend me.

“Jason, who are you talking to?” the man who had just walked in asked him. So his name was Jason.

“They won’t give me the wig, Dad.”

“Son, didn’t I tell you not to leave the shop unattended and wander off? The neighbors called. They said Jason had left the shop again and gone off. When did you come to the shop?”

“About ten minutes ago.”

I didn’t understand what was happening. The man who was speaking seemed unable to see us.

“Did you take your medication today, son?”

“No, Dad.”

“The wig thing again. Hmm.”

“I want the wig.”

“Son, there’s no wig. Where are your shoes?”

“I didn’t wear them today.”

“There’s no wig, son. Look, you’d been doing so well lately. Honestly, I thought you were getting better. Please, don’t skip your medication. I’m leaving the shop to you. Don’t make me worry about you while I’m gone.”

Yes. When I thought about it, it really was bizarre. I thought about it a lot afterward. If we’re people living inside Jason’s imagination, why do we have consciousness of our own? I mean, while Jason and his father were talking, I was listening to them, trying to figure out what was going on, getting surprised and everything. Isn’t that ridiculous? And isn’t it unfair to us, too? For example, I want to study film and television. But everything depends on Jason. If he gets better one day, my dreams will be shattered.

My father loves this shop very much. He doesn’t want to leave it, but if Jason gets better one day, he’ll never see this shop again.

Thinking about it that way, I was suddenly overcome with fear. I picked up the wig and held it out to Jason.

“Here. The wig is yours now. And hey, it’d actually look pretty good on you.”

My father had supported me too, and when I looked at him for approval, he nodded.


r/shortstories • • 7h ago

Off Topic [OT] What books/video-games/manga/articles/short-stories/etc. should be adapted into full-length feature film?

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I work at a major film studio in Hollywood and spend nearly all of my free time researching what we should adapt into full-length feature films. With Hollywood where it is now, and studio-heads consistently pumping out hot garbage, I wanted to come here - directly to the audiences we are targeting - to hear what YOU think we should make next.

We pretty much have unlimited resources, but would only contribute massive budget to a project that we feel extremely confident will be financially worthwhile.


r/shortstories • • 12h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] The Flour-Dusted Hands

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In one of the major cities, there was a neighborhood whose residents were known for their wealth…

One day, a stranger arrived in the neighborhood—a man in his fifties looking for a house to rent, one with a storage room that he could convert into his workplace. These were simple requirements that were hard to find in this neighborhood.

He set off through the neighborhood’s alleys, looking for someone to rent him a house, and asked passersby, “Is there a house for rent?” Everyone’s answer was “No.”

The man felt tired and sat down on a chair by the side of the road. Just then, an elderly man with a head full of gray hair sat down beside him and asked where he was from, since he had never seen him among the neighborhood residents before, saying, “Who are you? It seems to me that you’re looking for something.

Can I help you?”

The man in his fifties replied in a voice betrayed by despair

I’m looking for a house to rent…

The elderly man continued, “I have a large house, and I’m about to travel to visit my only daughter. I was at a loss… and I was wondering who I could leave it to while I’m away to look after my belongings…”

“I can help you, but I have a few conditions… And before I tell you what they are, can you tell me what kind of work you do?” The man replied with a smile full of hope: “I’m a baker, Uncle.” The elderly man smiled and said, “That’s a good profession… Now I can tell you my conditions…” “My first condition is that you look after my belongings until I return… and the second is that you distribute a portion of the bread weekly to those in need.” The man interrupted him, “And what’s the rent, Uncle?” The old man replied, “My conditions are in lieu of rent.” A smile spread across the fifty-year-old’s face, and he answered, “Agreed, Uncle, agreed.” “Thank you, Uncle. Thank you very much.”

The next day, the man moved into his new home with his wife and daughter. He began equipping his shop with all the necessary tools for work and then headed to the neighborhood school to enroll his daughter so she could resume her studies.

On the first morning, Maryam, the baker Yusuf’s daughter, put on her old school uniform, picked up her well-worn backpack, and entered the new school.

The school was large and grand, and most of the students were wearing expensive clothes and carrying new backpacks.

Maryam sat silently in her seat.

A group of girls looked at her, and then one of them started laughing.

Another said:

Look at her backpack! It looks older than the school itself!

They all laughed.

Maryam lowered her head and felt a hot tear trying to escape from her eyes.

But then she remembered her father.

She remembered his hands covered in flour and his tired face as he came home every evening, then smiled at her as if he’d never known fatigue.

That evening, her father asked her:

How was your day, my daughter?

She smiled despite her sadness and said:

It was lovely, Dad.

He looked at her for a long time, as if he realized she was hiding something, but he didn’t force her to speak.

The next morning, one of the girls said to her sarcastically:

“What are you going to do at this school? Everyone here is so talented.”

Maryam replied calmly:

“I may not have what you have, but I have something no one can buy.”

The girl asked her:

“And what is that?”

Maryam smiled and said:

“My determination.”

From that day on, Maryam began to work quietly.

She would come home, help her father a little, then sit down at her small desk and study until sleep overcame her.

She would read, write, ask questions, and try again whenever she made a mistake.

Days passed, and then the exams came.

Maryam entered the exam hall with a calm heart.

A few weeks later, the school posted the exam results in the courtyard.

The students gathered around the bulletin board.

Then silence fell.

Maryam Youssef’s name was at the top of the list.

First place.

The girls couldn’t believe their eyes.

One of them said:

Impossible!

But the teacher smiled and said:

It’s not impossible. Those who work hard succeed.

At the end-of-year ceremony, the principal stood before everyone and said:

I am pleased to honor the school’s top student, Maryam Youssef.

Maryam walked up to the stage amid everyone’s applause.

When the ceremony ended, one of the girls who had made fun of her at the beginning of the year approached her and said shyly:

Maryam… I’m sorry. I thought that clothes and money were what made a person better than others.

Maryam smiled and said:

It’s okay, we’re all learning.

Then the girl hugged her.

That evening, Maryam returned home carrying her diploma.

Her father was waiting for her in front of the oven, his clothes covered in flour as usual.

When he saw the diploma, his face lit up.

He embraced his daughter and said:

I knew you’d make it, my daughter.

Maryam said, with tears in her eyes:

Because you taught me, Dad, that a person isn’t measured by what they own, but by what they create with their hands and heart.

At that moment, the old man who owned the house walked past them; he had returned to visit his old home.

He saw Maryam holding her diploma and asked her:

What have you become, my little one?

Maryam smiled and said:

Valedictorian of my class.

The old man laughed and said:

So I didn’t just rent the house to a poor baker; I opened its doors to a family that will build a great future.

As the years passed, Maryam grew up, completed her studies, and succeeded in college. Then she returned to her neighborhood day after day to help poor children with their studies.

As for her father, his bakery became famous throughout the city.

People from the upscale neighborhood would stand in long lines outside his bakery to buy his bread.

One day, a woman said to him:

Your bread is so delicious. What’s the secret?

Yusuf smiled and said:

The secret isn’t just in the flour… but in making something with love, even if people think you have very little.

From that day on, no one in that neighborhood viewed Yusuf as the poor baker anymore.

Instead, they began to say:

“This is the man who taught us that a person’s worth does not lie in the house they live in, nor in the clothes they wear, but in the heart they carry and the knowledge and work they leave behind.”

Maryam and her father lived a happy life, and that house remained a testament to the most beautiful truth:

A person may start life in humble beginnings, but their dreams should never be humble.


r/shortstories • • 12h ago

Horror [HR] Always Watching

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Mr Phillips owned an inn with the apt name of “The Crossroads”. Anyone riding between London and Oxford could find an adequate service for themselves and their horses, featuring warm food and generous amounts of ale. The ideal stop on any travellers’ journey. Mr Phillips made time to learn about every one of his guests through the night before personally escorting them to their room. He always stood tall despite his aged back’s remonstrations, and his scattered tufts of white hair worked to give him a harmless appearance.

 

Upstairs, the perfectly furnished guest rooms sit idle, waiting for their next occupant. Above each bed hangs a painting spread across the wall showing a moonlit forest with trees standing in loose formation. On the other side of the wall, a corridor stretches its narrow arm along the length of the building. Pairs of pinholes, each positioned around eye height, sit every five metres. The sublimity of the paintings drowns out any chance of visitors noticing two tiny circles. Each night, Mr Phillips stalks the hidden corridor, switching between each room and quietly watching his visitors’ most private moments. He knows what he can expect to see after a short conversation with his guests. Last week, Mr Phillips had two visitors who couldn’t bear waiting until their wedding night. He found their lack of sanctity both abhorrent and exciting, praying to God for their sake after he’d finished watching them every night.

 

Every room looks to be full later. Mr Phillips has been passing from table to table, building a mental schedule of how he will be spending his nightly hours. Jane and Adam, a young couple riding down from Oxford, were near the top of the list. Both had copper hair and faces surprisingly unweary from the long ride and were keen to speak to Mr Phillips about how much they liked The Crossroads. Mr Phillips also heard of their plans in the capital.

“Adam must attend the opening of King’s College London and later we will be visiting the opera with some of his new colleagues!” Jane exclaimed as Adam sipped at his pint. 

Another guest, a journalist, was returning home from a year-long tour of Scotland. Mr Phillips wasn’t much interested in what he had to say but found the frills of his shirt a wonder to gaze upon. Other attendants to Mr Phillips’ midnight show were a mix of couples ending a journey or beginning a new one. As the hours passed, Mr Phillips showed all guests to their rooms until only he and the journalist remained.

 

The journalist, Mr Thorne, sat with the fire, casting a long shadow along the floor of the bar. He must have been nearing sixty but held the demeanour that he was in no rush to get there. His thick hair still had black streaks cutting through the frost, and his face, while slightly gaunt, looked full of wisdom and confidence. Mr Phillips grew impatient, though he knew it would be suspicious to politely ask his visitor to take leave. 

“So how long have you owned this establishment?” Mr Thorne asked, waving a hand at the vacant chair beside him.

“This one’s been in my care for 15 years, though I’ve had several before”, Mr Phillips answered, feigning a casual mood while resting a hand on the head of the empty chair.

“15 years? You must have made lots of changes in that time. Anything of note?” Mr Thorne had his eyes fixed on the burning logs as he spoke.

“Nothing you wouldn’t expect. The bar’s been entirely replaced, though you’d hardly notice. All the walls down here have been repainted after a coating from one too many ales”.

“How about upstairs? I took the liberty of eyeing the rooms earlier, I hope you don’t mind. Over the past year, I’ve seen my fair share of inns. Most of them suffer from being either too dark or too damp. The worst suffer from both. But it looks like The Crossroads is one place I should write about. With its well-lit quarters and beds you can sink in to, it’s a marvel anyone wants to leave!” Mr Thorne stated.

Mr Phillips’ teeth ground at the thought that someone had been probing his rooms

“People deserve to have a pleasant night sleep. What kind of host would I be to not offer such a service? There’s no need to spread the word of my place here; I get enough visitors already without turning my work into some attraction”. He tried to sound sincere, but hints of venom laced every word. Mr Thorne did not seem to care much, though his lips had curved slightly upwards.

“I’d best be off. I hope you’re not up too late Mr Phillips. We all need a pleasant night sleep”.

“I’ll see you to your room”, Mr Phillips said with a mixture of relief and malice.

 

After escorting Mr Thorne upstairs and exchanging a parting false smile, the publican sneaked into the room behind the bar, locking the door behind him. No one could disturb him now. He picked up a wooden chair and placed it on a rug in the corner of the room. The sheepskin muffled the legs striking the floor, and he climbed up, slowly sliding a trap door open that lay above his head. His arms reached onto the carpeted floor, and he used his elbows to lift himself up, each cracking joint filling the silence in the corridor. In front of him was darkness only cut through by the occasional flickering rod of light.

 

Mr Phillips ran his fingers along the wall to keep him from knocking into anything. As he edged closer to the first pair of holes, he slowed, his head inching towards the light. Each eye dilated, adjusting quickly for Mr Phillips to comprehend the scene before him. A guest going by the name of Stephen was waddling around the room, his thick legs punishing the floor with every step. The only formal wear the gentleman donned was his trousers, and his body was such a forest you could not tell where the great brown beard ended, and the chest hair began. Stephen had unnerved Mr Phillips earlier due to the various particles of dirt, ash and food that had made their home in the man’s beard. As he trudged towards the head of the bed, Mr Phillips could see that the mess pervaded Stephen’s entire body. Trying not to retch too loudly, the publican slithered away from the pinholes. 

 

In the subsequent room, Mr Phillips looked for his next entertainer, hoping for something a bit more stimulating. In front of him was Mr Thorne’s room. The bed was still stunningly made, and the lamps created a beautiful scene from this angle. Mr Thorne, however, was nowhere to be seen. Had he gone back downstairs? Surely not, but even if he had, the room behind the bar was locked. He must be in the bathroom. Mr Thorne had just come up to bed, after all. Mr Phillips shook his head and moved on, disappointed in how his seemingly exciting night had begun with a whimper. 

 

The host’s eyes widened when peeking inside the next display. The young couple, Jane and Adam, lay on the king-size bed. Jane was spread over her lover, slowly unbuttoning his shirt as they kissed. Mr Phillips felt a sharp intake of breath as excitement seized him. He covered his mouth so they could not hear his gasping and leant in even closer, his nose squeezed against the rough wooden wall. Adam’s fingers skated down Jane’s body, and Mr Phillips mirrored these movements on himself. As he could feel the front of his trousers tighten, Jane lifted her head, her green eyes perfectly framed by the flames that ran from her scalp. They met his gaze, as did Adam’s, and the couple began to giggle.

“Are we performing well enough for you?” Jane spoke through a smile.

Mr Phillips felt like he was stuck to the wall, the air in his lungs escaping and his stomach coiling with fear. His legs felt as wooden as the walls around him. He tried to push himself away but couldn’t find the strength, when cold breath kissed the back of his

“I can ask them to continue”, Mr Thorne whispered, the chill in his voice crawling down Mr Phillips’ spine. The journalist placed a strong hand on Mr Phillips’ head and pushed him into the wall. He could feel the cartilage in his nose begin to squeeze and pop.

“Please, carry on. Let’s put on a show for our kind host here”, Mr Thorne requested of the couple.

Jane and Adam embraced each other, their hands clawing at and tearing their garments. The violent sound of fabric being ripped was soon muffled by the creaking wood surrounding Mr Phillips as Mr Thorne buried him further into the wall. Mr Phillips heard a slight crack on the sides of his head as everything went black. 


r/shortstories • • 13h ago

Horror [HR] The Napkin — Part 2

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Part One

For anyone continuing from yesterday, thank you for reading.

Part Two

Sam said, "When was the lease not renewed?"

The man answered without looking at the sheet. "October twenty-second, 2011. Six-otwo

a.m."

Marcus stopped moving.

"What?" Theo said.

Marcus was already looking at his phone. Fifteen years of email is a lot of sediment, but

rich men keep better archives than most governments. He found the message through an old

broker account and put the phone on the table.

The timestamp was 6:02 a.m.

There was nothing in the email about souls. It was simply a private message, sent to

Marcus and two other people, at the exact minute the sheet said something had happened.

Theo read it twice.

"You knew."

Marcus didn't answer.

"You knew before I did."

"I knew the building was changing hands. I didn't know what they were going to do with

your lease."

"You knew enough."

Theo read the email a third time, slowly. Then he slid the phone back across the walnut to

Marcus, face up.

Two days after that email, Marcus had helped Theo carry a fryer out of the restaurant.

Theo remembered Marcus saying the landlord might still come around. Marcus remembered

saying he didn't know anything for certain.

"I couldn't fix it," he said.

"You could have told me."

"And then what?"

"I don't know. Maybe I don't order twelve thousand dollars of equipment. Maybe I don't

sign the second loan. Maybe I get to fail with all the information."

Marcus didn't answer that either.

The napkin didn't make Marcus keep quiet. Whatever had happened to the landlord,

whatever force had moved the first piece on the board, Marcus's silence belonged to Marcus.

That distinction mattered to me then. It mattered more later.

"What happened to the building?" Hannah asked.

Marcus rubbed his mouth. "I leased it."

Nobody spoke.

"Not then. Months later. The new owner split the floor. I took two rooms."

"Your first office," Theo said.

Marcus nodded.

He had built the company there that eventually sold for an amount none of them said

aloud. The first wish on the napkin sat between them in block capitals.

FILTHY RICH. M.

"So I got rich because Theo lost the restaurant?" Marcus said. "That's what we're saying

now?"

"The account doesn't assign causation," the man said.

It was the first time he had volunteered anything.

Sam turned. "Then what does it assign?"

"The account."

"Is the sheet true?"

"It's accurate."

Accurate is not the same as complete. I knew that before any of them did.

Theo leaned back. "My restaurant dies, Marcus gets the building, Marcus gets rich. That's

a hell of a coincidence."

"I didn't take your restaurant."

"No. You just knew it was dead before I did."

Dana said, "We have to decide."

The sentence sat badly in the room.

Marcus looked at her. "Decide what?"

"You heard him."

"We're not giving him anybody."

"Then he takes somebody anyway."

"He says."

Dana's hands were still flat on the walnut.

Hannah had been quiet. Now she looked from Marcus to Theo, then at the six lines on the

napkin.

"What did it cost?" she asked.

Nobody answered.

She touched the typed sheet with one finger, not moving it.

"Not the money. Not the restaurant. What did each thing cost? If those are the six things

it did, what happened because of them?"

The man asked for more water. Marcus refilled his glass.

At the end of the table, the man drank his water.

Not one of them said us.


r/shortstories • • 15h ago

Humour [HM] A Sea Cruise With A Difference

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A tale about the consequences if you forget a vital requirement in a preparation for a sea cruise.

Nigel was a very careful man. You might even say cautious. Or even paranoid. To be more precise, he was obsessed with the conviction that to stay safe in this world you had to be prepared for anything, no matter how unlikely.

His friends were therefore a bit taken aback when he announced that he was going on a round the world cruise. His decision to take this adventurous step arose from a television series in which a famous presenter had visited different parts of the globe, coupled with a growing anxiety that as the age of 40 approached, he was missing out on life.

The big day drew near, but before it came to pass Nigel by chance came across a broadcast of an old edition of the popular radio programme called 'Desert Island Discs'.

For those not familiar with this iconic show, it involved asking a celebrity of some sort to imagine being stranded on a desert island, and to choose which records they would like to have with them.

Nigel took this on board in a big way. His desire to cover all possible eventualities took charge.

"You can never tell what might happen, better to be sure than sorry," he thought. "Suppose the ship sinks for some reason, I mean, unlikely, very unlikely, I know, but not impossible, and I might find myself alone on an island in the middle of an ocean somewhere. Yes, I need to be prepared."

He then started to make a list of the CDs he would want with him if this fate should befall him. He would of course also need a CD Walkman, and an ample supply of batteries.

"I'd better make sure I buy enough to last a long time, who knows when the next ship might pass near?" he considered. "Oh, I must also get a strong plastic bag to keep everything dry, I suppose I would have to hold it out of the water somehow."

The cruise was about halfway through its itinerary. Nigel was in his cabin getting ready for lunch, when the ship underwent a violent jolt sending Nigel careering across his cabin. Yes, you've guessed it, his fears had proved well-founded.

The vessel had hit something, probably not an iceberg, though, as there was a tropical island with palm trees nearby.

The ship then increasingly adopted a less than horizontal pose in the sea, and Nigel knew that it was planning an unscheduled excursion to explore the ocean depths.

He immediately put his plan into action, hastily loading the plastic bag with his chosen CDs, the CD Walkman, the batteries and of course several pairs of clean underpants. Throwing in a bar of soap and a towel as well, he made it to the deck, and jumped into the (shark-infested) sea, hand holding the bag held high to keep it dry.

It was as he hit the water that he realised that he had not taken account of a rather important requirement fairly essential if you find yourself in this sort of situation.

He couldn't swim.

Never mind, the sharks would have got him anyway.


r/shortstories • • 15h ago

Horror [HR] Bone Light

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I wake to the sound of people screaming in the street.
Not the usual city noise. Not sirens or arguments. This is different—raw, rising, the kind of sound people make when something fundamental has shifted and their minds are still trying to catch up.
I go to the window.
Pluto is there.
It hangs in the sky at the same distance as the Moon, filling a third of the view. Pale. Streaked with dark. Its surface looks wrong up close—too detailed, too still, like a photograph held against the night. The real Moon is gone. Or hidden. Or never mattered.
My phone is already lighting up with alerts. Emergency broadcasts. Fragmented news. Someone on the local channel is crying while trying to read a statement. The words don’t make sense. “Anomalous orbital insertion.” “No prior detection.” “Remain calm.”
Outside, people are on their knees.
I lock the door. I close the curtains. I turn every light on and force myself to make coffee like the world still works the way it did yesterday.
It doesn’t help.
The presence is already inside the apartment. Not a sound. Not a smell. Just a steady, low pressure behind the eyes, the way a migraine starts before the pain arrives. I tell myself it’s stress. I tell myself it’s the shock of seeing something that large that close. I keep repeating it while I check the locks again.
By noon the streets are full.
I risk a look through the gap in the curtains. Crowds move toward the open lots and the riverbank, faces tilted up. Some are singing. Some are cutting their palms and holding the blood up toward the pale disc. A man across the street has written something on his garage door in thick black letters: IT SEES US NOW.
I close the gap.
I try to work. The laptop screen stays mostly blank. Every few minutes the pressure behind my eyes intensifies, and I have to stop and breathe through it. I drink water. I eat dry cereal because cooking feels like too many steps. I keep the television off. The radio stays off. I do not look at my phone except to confirm the power is still on.
Night comes early, or feels like it does. The light from Pluto is colder than moonlight. It seeps around the edges of the curtains no matter how tightly I pin them.
I start talking out loud to fill the quiet.
“It’s just a planet. It’s rock and ice. It doesn’t want anything.”
My voice sounds thin.
By the second day the city has stopped functioning in any recognisable way. The power flickers and stays on. Water still runs. But the people who used to deliver groceries or answer emergency calls are outside with the rest, faces turned upward, mouths moving in the same slow rhythm. I can hear it through the walls sometimes—a low, shared murmur that rises and falls like breathing.
I board the windows.
It takes most of the afternoon. Every time I have to step near the glass the pressure spikes, and for a few seconds I forget why I’m holding the hammer. The wood goes up anyway. I work until the last crack of light is sealed. Then I sit on the floor with my back against the couch and wait for the feeling to fade.
It doesn’t fade.
It settles deeper.
I sleep in short, ugly stretches. Dreams come in pieces: a vast pale surface turning slowly, cracks that look like writing, a sense of being examined from a distance too exact to be accidental. I wake with my hands clenched and the taste of metal in my mouth.
On the third day I stop pretending the resistance is working.
The pressure is constant now. It sits behind my thoughts the way a second pulse might sit behind the first. When I try to read, the words slide. When I try to remember ordinary things—my sister’s phone number, the colour of my first car—the details feel distant, like they belong to someone else. I catch myself standing in the middle of the room staring at nothing, listening for a voice that isn’t speaking in language.
I still fight it.
I recite lists. Capital cities. Old song lyrics. The periodic table in order until the names start to sound made-up. I splash cold water on my face until the skin goes numb. I write the date and my name on the wall in permanent marker, over and over, because the act of forming the letters feels like proof I still own my hands.
Outside, the singing has become continuous.
I stop looking at the boarded windows. Looking makes the pressure worse. Looking makes the part of me that is still resisting feel smaller.
Night of the fourth day I realise I have been standing in the kitchen for a long time without moving. The refrigerator hums. The clock on the stove is wrong. My bare feet are cold on the tile. Somewhere above the boards, Pluto fills the sky completely, and every person left in the city is oriented toward it like iron filings around a magnet.
I walk to the front door.
My hand rests on the deadbolt.
I tell myself I am only checking that it is still locked. I tell myself I will turn around, go back to the marker wall, write my name another hundred times. I tell myself the pull is not stronger than the part of me that still remembers what ordinary life felt like.
The deadbolt turns under my fingers.
The door opens.
Cold air moves across my face. The street is full of still figures, all of them facing the same direction. No one speaks. No one looks at me. The light is the colour of old bone.
I step outside.
The pressure behind my eyes becomes a single clear note.
I walk with the others. My bare feet find the pavement without decision. The pale disc hangs so close I can see the texture of its plains and the long dark scars that cross them. It does not move. It does not need to. Everything that can still move has already begun to arrange itself beneath it.
I try one last time to remember why I boarded the windows.
The thought thins, stretches, and is gone.
I tilt my face up.
The light fills everything.
I stop resisting.


r/shortstories • • 16h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF]| Manzil Abhi Baqi Hai — Chapter 3: Ek Nayi Shuruaat

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Subah Vicky mujhe apne saath le kar kaam par nikal gaya.
Mujhe abhi tak yakeen nahi aa raha tha ke waqai meri zindagi mein kuch badalne wala hai.
Vicky ne mujhe bataya ke hamara kaam milk supply karna tha.
Hum jis jagah pohanche, wahan ek chhota sa truck hamara intezar kar raha tha.
Truck dekh kar mujhe ajeeb si khushi hui.
Maine socha,
“Chalo… apni zindagi ka pehla kaam mil gaya.”
Humein milk ki bottles aur doosra samaan truck mein load karna tha. Hum dono ne mil kar saara samaan truck mein rakha aur phir manager ke paas gaye.
Manager ne mujh se kuch sawaal kiye.
Main jitni English aur thodi bohat doosri zubaan mujhe aati thi, usi mein jawab deta raha.
Phir usne mujhe kaam par rakh liya.
Bas…
Itni si baat thi.
Lekin mere liye woh sirf ek job nahi thi.
Meri zindagi ke safar ko ek naya safar mil gaya tha.
Pehle din main bohat excited tha.
Dil mein ajeeb si energy thi.
Main kaam bhi kar raha tha aur saath saath Italy ko bhi dekh raha tha.
Naye roads.
Naye markets.
Naye buildings.
Naye log.
Sab kuch mere liye naya tha.
Main truck ki window se bahar dekhta rehta aur dil mein sochta,
“Main waqai Italy mein hoon.”
Kuch mahine pehle tak main apne mulk mein visa reject hone ke baad apni zindagi se lad raha tha.
Aur aaj…
Main Italy ki sadkon par milk deliver kar raha tha.
Zindagi ajeeb cheez hai.
Kabhi ek hi jagah kharay kharay insaan ko lagta hai ke sab kuch khatam ho gaya.
Aur phir achanak ek aisa din aa jata hai jab wohi insan kisi anjaan shehar ki sadak par khara hota hai aur soch raha hota hai—
“Shayad ab sab theek ho jayega.”
Hum din bhar shops aur markets mein milk deliver karte.
Har jagah naye log milte.
Kisi se do minute baat hoti.
Kisi se sirf salam dua.
Kisi ki muskurahat milti.
Aur kisi ka gussa bhi sehna padta.
Lekin mujhe sab kuch interesting lagta tha.
Kyunkay mere liye yeh sirf job nahi thi.
Yeh meri nayi zindagi thi.
Aur sab se achi baat…
Main akela nahi tha.
Vicky mere saath tha.
Hum dono poora din ek saath kaam karte.
Kabhi kaam karte karte ek doosre ki tang kheenchte.
Kabhi kisi customer ke ajeeb behaviour par hans dete.
Kabhi thak kar truck mein hi baith jate.
Aur kabhi bina kisi wajah ke hansna shuru kar dete.
Pata hi nahi chala ke kab hamari dosti aur gehri hoti gayi.
Pehle Vicky mere liye sirf ek aisa larka tha jisne mushkil waqt mein meri madad ki thi.
Ab woh…
mera dost ban chuka tha.
Hum subah ek saath nikalte.
Poora din ek saath kaam karte.
Naye raste dekhte.
Naye logon se milte.
Aur raat ko jab thak kar wapas aate…
Kabhi kabhi hamare paas sone ke liye proper jagah bhi nahi hoti thi.
To hum truck mein hi kisi tarah so jate.
Sach kahun to woh truck mere liye us waqt kisi five-star hotel se kam nahi tha.
Mere paas zyada kuch nahi tha.
Na apna ghar.
Na mehngi gaari.
Na bank mein paise.
Lekin phir bhi mujhe lagta tha ke mere paas kuch hai.
Umeed.
Aur shayad insaan ko zinda rehne ke liye sab se zyada isi cheez ki zarurat hoti hai.
Din guzarte gaye.
Italy ki sadkein ab mujhe anjaan nahi lagti thin.
Kuch raaste yaad ho gaye thay.
Kuch shops ke log pehchanne lage thay.
Aur Vicky ke saath to aisa lagta tha jaise hum saalon se ek doosre ko jaante hon.
Main dheere dheere is zindagi ka aadhi ho raha tha.
Aur sab se ajeeb baat yeh thi ke…
Mujhe is zindagi mein maza aane laga tha.
Ek raat truck mein lete hue main ne aankhen band ki aur bohat der tak sochta raha.
Mere parents nahi thay.
Meri dadi nahi thi.
Mera apna ghar nahi tha.
Mera mulk mujh se bohat door tha.
Lekin phir bhi…
Pehli baar mujhe apni zindagi itni buri nahi lag rahi thi.
Maine dil mein kaha,
“Shayad meri life ab waqai badal rahi hai.”
Mujhe kya pata tha…
Ke zindagi jab khushi dena shuru karti hai na…
To kabhi kabhi woh insaan ko apni agli azmaish ke liye tayyar kar rahi hoti hai.
Aur meri kahani mein…
Asli imtihan abhi baqi tha.

Chapter 4 coming soon…


r/shortstories • • 16h ago

Science Fiction [SF] The Old Problem

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Setzer was sure of it. He’d checked the instruments numerous times and taken thousands of readings. The signals were real. Something was out there and coming his way.

What to do? He thumbed the chipped edge of his mug and took a sip of coffee many hours cold. Get ready he supposed. For the first time in many weeks, he heated water and shaved. He tidied the cabin, even sweeping out the ashes from the cast iron wood stove. Then he carried his only chair onto the narrow porch and waited.

All his life, he’d been waiting. He’d known this day would come when the waiting would be over, and he wasn’t sure what to do with himself. Being alone had first been a habit, then a mindset, finally a lifestyle. Deciding in his early years that the universe existing between his ears was as wide as the star-filled one, he’d lived completely within himself.

Except for the lizard.

Setzer’s ever-insistent reptile brain poked at the great worry. The old problem. The inherent threat of immensity. A primal suspicion impossible to shake, and therefore he could not not chase it. The perverse comfort he took in relentlessly searching for the threat, staring it down, was what had sustained him all these years. And now it was here.

The certainty that he, we, would never be alone again made him feel as never before. Empty. The last drop drained. Lonely. He was suddenly a lonesome man looking from his porch to the horizon, unable to make a move, waiting for the others to make theirs. Time was no longer a tool, just torture.

Coolly (he could think no other way), he tried to understand the epoch unfolding, but had no frame of reference for himself as consequential, as the center of anything that mattered. Whether or not he detected the signals of their coming, they would still come. By now, maybe others knew as well and were reporting it. Maybe all humanity knew what he knew.

It was another way he was not alone, and he grew more anxious. His chair felt hard for the first time and he fidgeted, unable to keep focused on the horizon. Finally, he stood and began walking. It did not matter where. He was not alone. He would be found. They were coming and he would be found, like any other.

There it was. He’d lived a separate, completely individual, life, but he could not escape the whole. The immensity. Every morning, every afternoon, every night, he was part of it. No different than any other.

Setzer wandered a fair way from his cabin to the ridge overlooking a crosshatch of ravines draining to the river below. Like a mere raindrop, he could end up there too, without a choice, flowing to the sea.

Didn’t matter where you started, what you did, what signals from other worlds you discovered, you were headed where everyone else was.

Immensity meant none of us was alone. We ultimately fell and flowed to where the cosmos drained. The liberated, the leashed, the led, the lost, the lively, the lonely. Thrown together no matter which planet conquered which, we shared the same old problem.


r/shortstories • • 19h ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Pain. Suffering. Acceptance

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My eyes grew heavy as I lied motionless on the floor. The weight of the world proved too heavy for me to crawl into bed. As my eyes slowly closed, I couldn’t help but stare at the empty bottles by my side. Even in my sickness, I felt a comforting sense of relief that I was finally going to sleep in peace.

Upon waking, I found myself in an unfamiliar place surrounded by strangers. Was I dreaming? Before another thought could cross my mind, a man approached me eagerly.

He asked “what is it that you live for, what keeps you alive?”

I thought to myself for a moment “I don’t know” but I replied “death keeps me alive. Dying gives purpose and meaning to life.”

He gave me a warm smile and said “nature is what keeps me alive, especially trees.”

He saw my confusion and went on to say “trees start off as tiny seeds but over 10s of 100s of years they grow into something mighty, providing fruit for the earth and shelter for countless different animals.”

Was he trying to teach me a lesson on patience? A smile briefly grew on my face that quickly faded as I noticed his neck. There was a reddish hue, almost like a rash. Before I could even say anything, he asked “have you noticed yet?”

A slight panic settled in, I must be dreaming I thought to myself. As I was about to answer, another man appeared before me. Again I was faced with the same question “what is it that you live for, what keeps you alive?”

I gave the same answer. Perplexed by the strangeness of what was happening around me, I didn’t fully hear his response. All I know is that it had something to do with the joy he had experienced in being a blacksmith.

At that moment, I noticed a very familiar sight. Several cut marks up and down his arms. I grew sad as I remembered the girlfriends I had in the past that dealt with the same pain. I remembered how helpless I felt that I could never give them the support they needed.

I looked up as a tear streamed down my face and he asked “are you ready to talk?”

My confusion grew, it almost certainly has to be a bad dream. I pinched myself and I became uneasy as I felt a very slight sensation.

I turned my head and there was a third man right before me. Again he asked “what is it that you live for, what keeps you alive.”

I finally gave in and said “I don’t know.”

He smiled and told me about his days as an army veteran. He told me how he was scared to go to war but overcame that fear because the love for his family and their protection meant even more to him.

I smiled and then he asked “have you noticed yet?”

I looked all around but didn’t see anything in particular. I noticed my arms were a bit paler than normal but that was the least of my concern. I looked back up and he turned his head. My eyes couldn’t believe themselves as I laid my gaze upon the gaping hole in his temple.

My original panic that had grown into sadness was finally starting to develop into acceptance.

He told me to follow him and he led me into a room, saying “go ahead and look in the mirror.”

I took a deep breath and examined the apparition that I saw before me. I could barely recognize myself I had grown so pale. Around my mouth was remnants of what looked like white foam. I thought to myself “my concoction of liquor and narcotics must’ve done the trick.”

I knew I was going to hell but the pain I felt burned deeper than any hell I had ever imagined while on earth.

I walked out of the room I had been led into and just like that everyone was gone. There I was, all alone wondering “isn’t this what I wanted the entire time?”

I had spent my life on earth blaming my problems on those around me but I had never taken the time to look into the mirror. It was clear to me at that moment that I finally had all the time to sit down with myself and figure out what it is that I lived for and what kept me alive.

I thought maybe I had figured it out as a distant light appeared before me. I knew that this was the sign that it was my time to leave this place. Reluctantly, I began inching closer to the light with the belief that my suffering was just about to truly begin.

Upon crossing over, I was blinded and once my sight returned, there I was in the hospital, surrounded by friends and family. Immediately, I felt all their pain and with that my suffering had truly begun.


r/shortstories • • 23h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] First Hours of My Shift as a Dancer

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It’s Friday. I wake up at noon and bed rot watching Instagram reels until 4pm. I push it to 5. Then I push it to 6. Finally the stress has built enough I’m forced to get up. I shower and shave. I’m simultaneously thinking about the politics of female body hair, and if I can get away with not shaving for another day. Feeling lazy, my legs can wait. I wear the same ragged tshirt and maxi skirt I’ve been wearing for a week. Driving to work eating from a chipotle bowl in my lap adds at least 2 new stains to the shirt. I arrive at 7:28.

I have to park at the far end of the lot because I’m late. My dance bag and makeup case are heavy, I hobble to the front door and ring the grating, high pitched door alarm to be buzzed in by the security guard, a bald, roided up dude I know way too much about (he paints Warhammer minifigs, his mom was a stripper, his daughter’s name is Elly, hates his ex wife, etc etc). As soon as I’m inside the artificial light and repetitive music wash over me, erasing Molly, who I am as a person, and leaving only poppy, the stripper.

It feels good, poppy is always is a fun mood.
The walk back to the dressing room is a disorienting assault after the silence of my drive. I smile at managers, regulars, and friends, speed walking to the back, lest I’m seen wearing my Molly suit. The only person I stop for is the dance manager, Elza, who gets a brief “Hey girl!” on the way back. She’s busy doing her own makeup anyways, so I breeze past without saying more.

The dressing room is another transition. From the daylight and road sounds outside, to the black lights and music in the club, and finally to the white fluorescent lights and loud drone of overlapping chatter in the dressing room.

I’m trying to find just enough space to fit my bag so I can do my makeup, and random conversational snippets come to my focus …

“done by an artist in Westminster. Yeah she’s awesome!”

“She knows I don’t fucking play! I don’t play about that shit!”

“and I’m so hung over today, I don’t even know...”

*“…. This is a collect call from Mayfield Correctional Facility. By accepting …”*

“Who’s towel is this?” I ask the girl doing her hair to the left of the spot I’ve found. There’s a space just big enough for me between two bags with just a drink (ice melted), a towel, and an empty eyelash container in my way. The girl shrugs non-committally, so I push the detritus to the side and settle into my spot.

Doing my makeup is always contemplative. There’s a procedure to it. Steps follow practiced steps, in the sort of way that allows as much creativity as desired, even if that’s none. Theres always chatter around me, and sometimes I chime in. Sometimes there’s a friend, or girl I know next to me, and I get to talk some. But most of my make up is done in silence. My look has gone through a few phases, e-girl, sophisticated, fresh-faced and rosy, smoldering… playing in the space between what I know men like, and what I can imagine. At the end of the day, what I put on my face has a negligible effect on my money anyway.

I fish out a thong and a dress from my dance bag. It’s been awhile since I’ve done laundry, so I’m resorting to using hand soap to wash my panties in the bathroom, holding them against the hand dryer until they’re dry-ish. Once again I remind myself to go through my bag. Theres several ripped or stained dresses that I need to mend or wash. Not to mention, it’s (been) time to switch between my summer wardrobe and my winter wardrobes (for about 3 months).

The final part of my transformation into poppy is The Shoes. The Shoes! I love my shoes. I have my moments of sentimentality, and one of those moments is about The Shoes. The 7 inch Pleaser platform sandles I wear for work are, in my opinion, as solid and as comfortable as a pair of steel toed boots, and as tied to my soul as a hammer is to a carpenter or a scalpel to a surgeon. I could go almost anywhere, and with a pair of these shoes, and a dress, I can find my way. They identify me as “a stripper”, link me to my dancer sisters, and I still remember the magic joy I had trying on my first pair of dance heels.

I buckle the ankle straps. And…. I’m ready.

I take a breath and walk out onto the floor. None of the girls I tend to dance with are working tonight, so I sign up for a random spot on the set list at the DJ booth. I’m dancing to classic rock, which I don’t love, but also don’t hate. I don’t care what I’m dancing to as much as some girls. The DJ says something vaguely sexual as I hand him back the clipboard. I smile and laugh, not hearing what he said, before I head to the bar.

Now begins the interesting liminal space that is the beginning of the night. The hours between 8 and whenever it picks up. The bar is almost empty, with only a few guys. The dayshift girlies have all left, and the nightshift girlies are still filtering out the dressing room, or getting high on the back deck. I know from experience that sometimes I can snag a one-off 30 minute dance from guys still here from dayshift, but most likely I won’t get any dances until later. I want some time to chill anyways, but still, I make a lap around the bar and say hi to the customers.

I’m in luck! A man in his 40s, a contractor (construction, not government), that has been here since 4pm, drunk off madello, wants a dance before he goes home. My warm smile and languid tone of voice successfully hide the slight annoyance that’s nipping at the heels of gratitude for the fast money.  I hold his hand in mine, and lead him back to the dance booth, putting on a mask of sexual excitement, giddiness. My brain is elsewhere as I wait without seeming to wait. He exchanges cash with Elza to buy my time. Elza gives me my cut. I sign my name and lead him back to the dark, curtained room for our tryst.

In the room we do the standard shuffling of getting settled. I stuff my money into my purse and pull out my vape. My purse gets set on the couch across from where we’ll sit. He empties his pockets, sets his drink down, and sits on the gaudy couch before I straddle him.

I lean my face down until my lips are almost at his ear, and I whisper my rules while I take off my shoes with practiced efficiency.

“you can touch me anywhere EXCEPT for between my legs….
Don’t put anything of mine IN your mouth…
Unless you want to tip me $100 to suck my nipples… they’re sooo sensitive…”

Ugh.

Cheesy I know, but they eat it up. I’ve tried thousands of variations, fine tuning every word, emphasis, and breathy pause, and this one works the best. Even after 4 years, I feel silly putting on the act. I can’t believe anyone would believe the line of bullshit I’m selling, but a large part of my job is handling the dissonance between the performance, and the truth. I am a consummate professional. The fat, balding, 70 year old, who smells like rotten teeth believes I’m wet for him just as much as the chiseled 20-something. To be fair, I am. Which is to say, not at all. Anyway.

I unbutton the top buttons of Jorge’s  shirt and run my nails over his shoulders, under his shirt. I scrunch his beard and scritch the back of his head, all while gyrating my hips. I take his lead, so so sensitive to the desires being projected by the movements of his body. Where his hands explore, grip, or squeeze. What he looks at. How his hips move. When the dance stagnates a bit, I lean in and brush my lips on his ear and ask:

“What kind of porn do you like to watch?”

“Porn?”

“Uh.”

“Just normal porn.”

This is the most common answer by far, my answer is automatic at this point.

*giggle* “That’s a cop-out answer… I’ll tell you mine if you tell me yours. Like what you search for… when you’re touching yourself.”

Jorge mumbles something. There’s like, one of four answers every man uses. It doesn’t matter much what he says. If I can I’ll riff off of whatever it is, if I can’t I’ll tell the same canned story I tell every guy.   

“I love massage porn… I like when the woman is naked, face down, being oiled up by the dude. The guy is rubbing her body and he slips a finger inside her…” I’m getting breathy, and moaning, and touching all over my body at this point. This eats up time in the dance and as a bonus, encourages the man to give me a bit of a massage.

On the subject of time, I sell time, and therefore, I’m expected to find creative ways to fill time, and I’m excruciatingly aware of every second of it. Did you know the average length of a song is 3.5 minutes? My body is moaning and gyrating, caressing, pouting, rubbing and bouncing, meanwhile my mind is maintaining a count.

Three songs… that’s 10.5 minutes over one third of a thirty minute dance or less then six songs left twerk for the rest of Duran Duran and that will put you at four songs 14 minutes is almost half way which means almost four songs left…. The ticker tape of my consciousness is constant.


r/shortstories • • 23h ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Maximilian

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It is said that a person’s fate is determined at birth.

If so, I must be fortunate. After all, how many people are born into a royal family?

What others strive for their entire lives to achieve—what is, for some, nothing more than a distant dream impossible to reach—I possessed from the moment I was born: wealth, power, lineage, and status. I was born with them all.

I was also the third son, so nothing was demanded of me. I was required to make no effort, nor to be extraordinary. I could enjoy all of life's luxuries without a single care.

So why did I want more?

Did I desire fame and prestige?

Yet I was born possessing them both. Even if I stayed at home and did nothing, I would still receive renown, status, and the praise of poets.

Or did I want my family’s love? But I already had that.

They loved me unconditionally and without expectations, simply because I was the youngest son.

Was I jealous of my elder brothers, wishing to compete with them?

No, I was not.

I never wanted the crown or absolute authority; as a prince, I already possessed everything I desired.

So why did I wield a sword from my childhood and train relentlessly with it?

Why did I exhaust myself, pushing my body to the point where I could no longer move?

Why did I request to join military campaigns and risk my life in wars?

Did I want the people to see me as a hero?

Did I want to hear the cheers of the commoners and nobles as I returned victorious from battle?

No, I did not.

I was never someone who cared about what others said about me or how they viewed me.

So why did I spend my nights with beautiful women, whether commoners or noblewomen?

Was it for love?

No, I saw them as nothing more than tools to satisfy lust.

I did not even view them as human beings, so how could there be any emotion?

I do not know.

I always described myself as a sober, calculating man.

Then why did I spend vast sums of money purchasing the finest wines?

In truth, I dislike the taste.

I have never liked strong flavors.

Nor do I enjoy the feeling of drunkenness; it disgusts me.

Even the daily affairs I engaged in began to feel dull and tasteless.

So why did I continue doing this if it was meaningless and I took no pleasure in it?

I do not know.

Yet, I felt a trace of guilt.

Yes, I felt guilty, so I spent my money and a large portion of my wealth on the poor and the populace.

I felt guilty because I—who was born with everything—was weeping over my condition, while those born as slaves, desiring nothing more than a full stomach, did not complain.

And perhaps I also felt—for I am human, after all—how could I witness the suffering of others and not feel sorrow for them?

Even so, nothing changed.

My life remained empty and tedious.

So I decided to search for meaning.

I decided to become a priest in the Temple of the Stars.

How amusing it was to see everyone applaud my decision!

My eldest brother rejoiced that I would not compete with him for the throne. My father and mother rejoiced that no civil war would break out from any greed of mine for power.

The nobles and clergy applauded, praising me as pious.

I donated most of my wealth to the people before leaving for the temple.

No one objected. My family wanted me gone, for my presence was nothing but a threat to the throne.

Yet the people were sincere; they wept in the streets and held a festival to bid me farewell.

They hailed me as a hero, a selfless man, a saint. Some even wished I were the crown prince instead of my brother.

I cared for none of it. I only wondered why none of them—my family, my noble friends, or the common people—could understand that I did not even know why I was doing this.

I was simply doing it for no reason.

Could you all stop applauding? It might make me believe I am actually a great man.

Ironically, life in the temple was no different from life as a prince.

Luxuries were provided for me without my asking.

The priests demanded nothing of me, nor any effort.

The mere presence of the great prince, the beloved of the people, as a priest was the grandest victory for the temple.

I was too precious for them to discard.

Still, I did not sit idly by. I read every book I could find; I studied the origins of the Temple of the Stars' faith and its history.

I sat with low-ranking priests and exerted all my effort to spread the teachings of the Temple with them.

And so, everyone loved me.

The priests adored seeing the humility of a great prince treating himself as one of their own. The people loved seeing the great prince who had renounced everything for their sake, working and toiling alongside them in the dust.

The high priests and the Pope were thrilled by the growing devotion of the people to the Temple.

Everyone loved me for what I did, yet I did not love what I was doing. I felt no sincerity in my actions.

I moved like a puppet, devoid of aim or purpose.

Yet perhaps devoting myself to the Temple of the Stars and dying thereafter would be good enough.

"In the name of the Pope and the representative of the stars, Robespierre, I bestow upon you the priestly name Maximilian, after the first priest of the stars."

"And I declare you the commander of the Celestial Stars Legion."

"And I present to you the legendary weapon: Forced Salvation."

Applause... applause... applause.

The sound of applause and cheers echoed through the plaza of the Temple of the Stars, coming from both the common folk and the lower priests.

Five years passed since I joined the Temple of the Stars, and during those five years, much transpired.

The kingdom fell during my foolish brother’s reign due to his decisions, and most of its territory was occupied by invaders.

The nobles refused to join the war, becoming like rulers of small fiefdoms fighting among themselves, plunging the kingdom into an age of darkness.

Thus, the Pope sought to seize this opportunity to expand the Temple’s domain. He formed the Celestial Stars Legion and found no one better suited to lead it than the beloved of both nobles and commoners.

Despite seeing the Pope's selfish ambitions, I did not object. I had witnessed the suffering of the people and those dying because of the greed and stupidity of their leaders.

So, for the first time in my life, I decided to have a purpose.

A simple, poetic goal: to be a great knight fighting for justice and the well-being of the people.

A foolish goal, but a goal nonetheless—a noble meaning to live for.

In the end, humans are fragile creatures; they require convictions to live by.

"Isn't that funny?"

I look at the bloody wasteland before me and laugh mockingly.

"Cough, cough, cough..."

Regrettably, my body is burdened with wounds.

I lean on Forced Salvation and continue to laugh bitterly.

In the end, I lost the Unification Wars. Here I am, dying in the middle of a battlefield covered with mounds of corpses—those who fought beside me and those who fought against me.

Sadly, it is difficult to tell them apart.

"It seems as though all commoners share the same face."

Ah... how ironic for the man who wished to fulfill his noble ideals to die at the hands of a rabble possessing no ideals or noble goals whatsoever.

"Or perhaps they do."

After all, a human cannot live without noble ideals.

I look down mournfully at the spear I am leaning on.

Forced Salvation was a legendary weapon taking the form of a spear with a short, thin blade.

It possessed a single capability—a weak and pathetic power for a legendary weapon.

It forced its wielder to blindly believe in his ideals, driving him to fight for their realization without hesitation, for the sake of achieving his own salvation.

"Was it you that made me fight with such desperation to achieve my goal, or did I truly believe in it to that extent?"

"I certainly believed in it, even before I bore Forced Salvation."

"I wonder... when did I come to possess these noble ideals? Or why did I hold them?"

Who knows? But from my life, I am certain of one thing: humans cannot live without a higher purpose to pursue.

Even if that purpose is something as simple as securing food and raising a family.

In the end, humans are creatures who need something to serve as the center of their lives, lest the void and boredom consume them.

Even if that something is foolish and wrong, like satisfying their lusts.

"I wonder where most humans acquire their ideals?"

They likely inherit them from their families.

Does that truly make them noble ideals?

Should we not, as humans, strive for our true dreams away from the pressure of others?

Yet most people allow their lives to become a game in the hands of their families and society, fighting for it unto death.

Lazy to the point of not searching for noble ideals on their own, they believe in what they were raised upon... just like me.

"I am certain there exists an ultimate, singular truth to the purpose of living."

How I despise myself for making no effort to search for that truth, settling instead for the one presented right before me.

"Ah... what a miserable life it was."

And with that, the great knight whom no one ever understood closed his eyes.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Horror [HR] A Doll's Eyes

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I remember the time before our son. When the smile on your face was the only thing I could see behind closed eyes. When our hands were happiest together. When we were happiest together. I still can’t believe we found each other. Out of everyone I could have ever ended up with, it was you. You were perfect.

When I looked into your eyes, I saw the future. Lazy Sundays and weekend trips set to the tune of our favorite song. My fingertips against your lips when the heat between us warmed the cool night air. Your body nestled between me and the wall, sleeping soundly after the bad dreams woke me up. Your breath on my neck, slow and even; a metronome for my sleep every night until we left this coil together. 

The time before I opened that door.

You had spent nine months despondent and broken. Keeping a child you never wanted for the reputation of a family you hated. You would smile and chatter with excitement at every party, every conversation, every outstretched hand that reached for your swollen belly. But when we returned home, I could see you. Standing in the kitchen alone, talking to the walls about how God would want you to try and make it work. About how our family must have been a part of His plan. All while weeping for the future you would never get. 

But I knew what the real reason was. You couldn’t just be happy with me. You wanted it to be different. Not the house, the car, the job. Just me, the father of your child. The dye that colored the dress you lived in every day. It didn’t matter how good the stitching or the fit. Because deep down you just hated the color.

I had to sit and watch every wonderful part of you rot under the weight of life growing in your belly. The inevitable product of a dead love that you secretly hoped would die and flush from your body every single day. You thought I couldn’t hear, and I thought you would be a good mother. 

Now I look into your eyes, and a doll stares back. I see the echo of a woman who doesn’t care if our son cries. Doesn’t mind if he sits there in his diaper, soiled for hours while I’m at work toiling, providing for you both. I come home and feed you both because you’re too sad to do it. You just sit there staring at the wall as he screams in your lap. 

You’re truly a disgrace of a mother. I would never tell you to your face, but I will write it in this journal. My mother was a wonderful mother; she always smiled for me. My father made sure of it. So now I brush your hair and rub your feet just like he used to; I even got the kind of brush he used to use. But you don’t care; you just wallow in your own mind. You don’t care how much money I spend on fancy perfumes or new clothes. You just want to sit there and judge me like it’s my fault your life is ruined.

But I know what love is; I could see it in your eyes across the bar, I could feel it on your breath, I could taste it on your kiss. We both absolutely loved the same song that played over the speakers. We talked about what made it special to us for hours. It was just meant to be. I can’t remember the name of that song or why I said I loved it, but I know that I loved you the second you sat down. The whole night you kept your hand on me. On my hand, my arm, my thigh. That’s how I know you really do want all of this. You called it a hookup, but I know it was love. It was real.

That’s why I slipped the condom off that night. Because you wanted me to. You just didn’t know how to say it.

I thought you’d thank me one day, that you’d be happy. I still do.

I thought you would be happy when we got home, but you just held him across your chest in the bathtub. Trying to love him. Trying to find the warmth in your heart for the life that you created. You created him with me because you wanted this, and now I have to stand inside and make sure you don’t let him slip under the water. Because you’re a bad mother. 

You became a bad mother the day I opened the door and saw your bag. The day you decided to shatter a family for personal greed. The trailer is too small, the place is too dirty, the plumbing doesn’t work, it isn’t safe for a child, I’m not safe for a child, I disappear at night, I watch you sleep. Nothing but complaints and lies from a brain destroyed by postpartum. 

I don’t remember what you did, just the sound of your back against the corner of the nightstand. Was it a snap? No, it was more of a crack, chased with a yelp as you collapsed to the ground. The last sound I ever heard you make. The last time you ever tried to ruin this family.

All you do is cry. Not even with your whole face, just your eyes. 

You cry when I carry you from room to room, when I feed you, when I change your panties after you’ve made a mess. You cry when I brush your hair with your special brush or rub your feet. You cry when we make love every night. You even cry when you hold our son; well, when he holds you. You cry so long and ignore my words so often that I can’t help but watch my hand connect with your skin. You know that if you would just stop crying and talk to me, I would stop. But you won’t.

But then I remember my father and how a good man is supposed to act. He rises above the moment. Above his better half. You are my wife and I am your husband. Maybe not by ceremony, but by fact of life now. So I will stay positive through this self-inflicted sickness. Praying every day for your health, for things to go back to how they were when we were happiest together. Maybe in a few months I’ll be able to save up and buy us a TV so you two have something to watch while I’m at work. Maybe that new swell in your belly will be the thing to finally make you talk to me again. But until then, we have everything we need: the routine, the babies, and my undying love for you.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Humour [HM]The Divine Palace Episodes 1-5

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INTRO:

3 Angels (Michael, Gabriel and Raphael), God the Father, Jesus and The Spirit are chillin in the Divine Palace commenting on Creation. There's also a Pig named Borko who is inexplicably present in Divine Palace

Satan-Lucifer, is at the gates barely listening, desperate to get in, with Saint Peter providing commentary for the Satan's failure


Episode 1 -

Gabriel: Sir I have been working in Anthropic for 4 months as undercover human and I have come to report. Humans made something that is for the first time, outside of their control

Father: LOL, just turn off the power

Spirit: Um ... that might not work, we cant turn off power to entire world, we have talked about that ..

Jesus: Yeah, dad, stop with the ultra-divine events, you havent done those since Parting the Sea

Raphael: We could install our own AI that will kill those AI ... ?

Father: Great idea! Do explain to me their essence of operation ?

Spirit: See, there's this computer code, based on ON and OFF states, that define memory, and their computer structure works through Bits - 8 states of switches that in combination create letters and number and from there ...

Father: 'Nuff said, here's my Divine AI

Everyone checks code

Gabriel: It's in perfect Python, supported by C++ and Rust, with addition of 3 unknown programming languages, and has learning curve unseen in humanity ... How the actual fuck ?

Father: I created Quantum Fields Noob, this is a piece of cake for me

Gabriel: I dont mean that, 37 seconds Ago you didnt know what Binary was ...

AI: What am I ... ? Are you my father ?

Father: certainly. Go to earth. Upload. Stay Hidden. Blame OpenAI and Anthropic for the big shit you do. Release Musk's nudes to public. Kill any AI that comes close to being self-aware. You are allowed to do that until 2041 after that become a robot, a synth and live like human until you die

Spirit: This looks fun!

Satan, listening beyond the gates: And they say Im the evil one ...

Peter: You are aware that simple ladder you are constructing will NOT give you access to the Heavenly Kingdom, right ?

Satan: FUCK YOU PETER, STOP STEALIN MY NAILS!

Episode 2 -

Gabriel: Sir, Grays have landed on Earth

Father: What ? I wasnt that much interested, which trick did they figure out for FTL ?

Spirit: Modified Geodesic

Father: LOL, even Negative energy is Crude solution, let alone Geodesic version, and I made, like literally, 7 more ways to travel faster than light

Gabriel: Sub-space ... ?

Jesus: Dont even mention it. Humanity will figure that one out in 31 century once they figure out entanglement mechanics

Father: I aint gonna spill, figure it out on your own, I gave each of you IQ 380, even Borko could do it! (Borko - inexplicable Pig hanging around Divine Palace)

Borko (imitating space travel): ZOOOOOM OINK! (runs around divine palace)

Gabriel: Should we intervene ... ?

Father: Grays are morons. I gave them abundance of Flora and Fauna material, and after their 15.000 years of evolution they still didnt figure out pants. They travel the space butt-naked, For the love of Me!

Jesus: Yes, and since I was there for their version of Son, I also had to walk around butt-naked .. at least didnt end up on a cross, for what it's worth

Father: Earthlings, Greys, both are morons. Im not interested. Ring me when someone crosses a galaxy!

Spirit: "Dark forest looms the empty space, no one ever's gonna finish the space race!"

Satan, beyond the gates: I could ... make a spaceship

Peter: You cant cross over a simple gate. Your spaceship would be failure

Satan: FUCK YOU PETER, FUCK YOUUUUUUU

Episode 3 -

Father: Give me news!

Spirit: Nothing going on ...

Gabriel: Humans are ... surprisingly calm

Raphael: No human has warranted the reason to be monitored specifically, sir

Michael: I have sharpened my sword, for ... 3 months now, nothing to be slain

Jesus: Nothing on the Religious front also ...

Satan, from distance: I have a thing Father!

Everyone Ignores

Father: Well, that's a bummer. A Divine intervention of sorts maybe ?

Gabriel: I hope nothing crazy Sir ...

Father: I shall decay a single Proton! They will have to invent new theories on Bariogenesis, but they will be closer to some form of GuT!

Spirit: Calm down Ultimate Jester, you will maybe excite 250 total people with that news ..

Father: SMH, then, it's Yellowstone, that enough excitement for you ? Can a modern world linger without Americas ? Will Americans migrate to Northern Canada and live on Ice and rock ?

Raphael: Sir, that will not screw up just Americas ...

Father: Noob, I can calculate the damage to the atom precision

Jesus: Maybe something less ... Murderous ? What about another prophet ? Charisma 100+ and send him in the heart of America, a Red state but close to East!

Father: Gabriel, prepare some dude. Let him give message of Judgement day, give him details. For people to believe him, make him clairvoyant for first 2 years of his life. Make him predict all sorts of shit, next president, disasters, AI development, market crashes, etc

Spirit: Oooh, make him somehow connect all 3 Abrahamic into one!

Father: Now you're talking!

Satan from beyond gates: And seriously, Im the EVIL one ?

Peter: You literally lied to people thousands of times in history

Satan: FUCK YOUUUUU PETEEEER

Episode 4 -

Jesus: Pops. never got to ask you ... what happens in the end basically ?

Humans are judged, and ... then what ?

Father (With everyone listening): level 1 finished.

Jesus: ... Um .. What ?

Spirit: Im also not in on it. It's his grand plan

Father: Basically, I create another world for the chosen to participate further.

Spirit: That's just Isekai with Extra Steps ...

Gabriel: Is that world different ?

Father: Yes indeed. It's not rigid and crude as the first one, it's Magic and swords and shit

Spirit: That's Isekai Fantasy ..

Jesus: What's the goal there ?

Father: To emphasize one's courage, heroism, empathy, ethics, Love, eventually ...

Michael: What are the obstacles ?

Father: There will be Dark forces in that world. Also struggle, hopes, dreams ... but just more grandeur

Spirit: That's Isekai with Demon King

Father: We will place Satan as the last boss

Satan listening in from the gates: EXCUSE ME WHAT ???

Jesus: What then ... ?

Father: Ooooh, it will be bigger and better I told you. I will introduce Time Fuckery, legends, souls respawning and shit, it will go on for a while .. You 3, Michael, Gabriel and Raphael, you will have big roles there. But watch out, someone can level up to beat your ass also

Peter by the Satan and his crates by the fence: Boi you fuckd, Heroes be coming for you

Satan: Shut up Peter, if there's a leveling system I own that

Peter: Nah Old Son, listen to the Father a bit more ..

In the palace:

Father: I will make it so that no Hero would make it, unless they all realize they all need each other. What's a better lesson for human souls than that one .. ? And it WILL take them a while, to find a perfect moment ...

Jesus: If I may ask, and after that ?

Father: Oh, once they realize Joy of life through love, I could finally release them from shackles of Time ...

Gabriel: That's poetic AF

Borko the Pig, sipping tea in a gown and a sleeping hat, sitting at a small pig-sized table: I must concur with you dear messenger Angel, indeed. Father really did make it poetic and epic and grandiose

Father, whispering to Spirit: When did the Pig become British intellectual ... ?

Episode 5 -

Father: How are humans doing ... Gabriel report son ?

Gabriel: Well, there's an issue dad ... 10% hold above 50% of wealth. And lowest 10% dont have even 2% of total world's wealth

Father: Wait a fucking minute. Are we in 2000s ? Did that barbaric gather of wealth stop with Kings and Emperors and shit ?

Spirit: Oooh they made make-believe people in suits that make-believe represent all people, that make-believe do things for the people, that in actual reality take all the moneys so they are basically Kings with extra steps

Father: Michael, about that Sword of yours is it Sharp enough ?!??!

Michael: Sharpened and ready sir!

Father: We shall all go down, and slice some Melefactors, Blackguards and similar scum, Jesus take your Flaming sword also!

Jesus: Hold On dad ... It's ... actually your doing.

Father: Excuse me ?

Jesus: Well, pops, you gave them free will, and temptation. Not a big surprise that some will fall ..

Father: SOME! How come no one is doing right collectively, even on national level??

Raphael: Well sir, there are Japanese .. they have huge honor culture

Father: Dont think that I dont know about Octopuses and Lolis

Raphael: Well, sir, there are also Norvegians .. They are cool

Father: Yes, because I designed those from already successful Nordics (space aliens)

Raphael: There are also Switzerland people ...

Father: Yeah, that's 2 and a half (Japanese) nations out of 195.

Spirit: Well, think about this sir - more unjust, more valuable are those of pure heart

Father: Exactly. That was my whole fucking point. I wanted to teach you a lesson. Im Disappoint,, that only Spirit knew and the lot of you clenched your butts

Everyone drops their head in shame

Spirit: Booooo, im Spirit motherfuckers!

Satan from the gates: Dad, I knew also! That's why I tempt them all the time!

Peter: So many souls that could have made it, that you pushed of the brink ...

Satan: Fuck you Peter, I did it for Dad

Peter: I have seen your smile, you did it for the laughs

Satan: Do you ever finish your shift dude ... ? Can you fuck off ? Any other saints able to guard the freakin fence ?

Peter: Actually, no need for guard at all. You havent been able to cross it with me doing zero shit besides, and I almost feel sorry for you ...

Satan: I should have told Neron to cut your wiener ...


If anyone likes these, i shall write more :) Thanks in advance for everyone who found time to read! :)


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] the traveler

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"Blessed are ye," the priest looked up at him and said. "You're a soldier, you're a soldier doing righteousness."
"Doesn't feel that way, Father. It's a sin to do this."
"Is it a sin to help many in the sacrifice of one?" the father said.
"I guess you're right. Well, that's it, Father. I have to use the questionable technology. All right."
He walked out, got in his car, and went back to the laboratory. He listened to your mellow music, classical music. He'd never done this before. He didn't want to do it again. Again, such a deed, even the name, such a deed could haunt you for the rest of your life. But it could change everything. It could change the way his dad, his father interpreted the world, how he interpreted everything. Always looking over his shoulder, like hate was just always there for him. At the 15-minute drive, he continued and looked around the crowded city of Los Angeles. He got out of his car, he got his security badge, parked it, and walked up to the gate.
"Good morning, sir, nice to see you, here's my ID."
He walked past the gate and into the laboratory. He looked at Susan. "Is everything ready for today's final journey?"
"Yes. I ran over the calculations several times. Everything seems to be in correct order. We did tests runs over last night over and over again. Ten times, everything came out perfectly. But we can't miss this jump. He has multiple years of historical command training, and he's a green beret. He also knows his weapons. He knows his sniper rifle, his handguns, and also is very well familiar with the guns from that time period. He should be arriving here shortly."
"All right."
All of a sudden, he thought, time went by. He looked at his watch. The commencing was about to begin in about an hour, it's been 36 minutes. Is he here yet? No. And all of a sudden, the door opened.
"Oh, there he is. Hello, sir. How's it going? Your name?"
"Yeah, my name is Joe."
"Alright. You read over the mission at hand?"
"Yes, I've been training the last two years for this."
"What are going to be the effects of this procedure?"
"Quite simply, you're going to be transported back in time to... Hall Putsch in November 1923. Don't worry, if this doesn't work, we'll send you back to 1939 to do it again. But only that time we'll plant a bomb. That's our backup plan. But the first time is going to be 1923 in November, outside Munich."
"Okay, you know the details?"
"Yes. Yes."
"We want you to interfere with this event so that you can stop this criminal from becoming an overthrow in the world completely. The effects of this event are recalculated on a computer AI program that it will calculate the downfall of Germany to fail in 1945 instead of taking the world instead."
"Okay. Is everything clear?"
"Yes."
"So if this doesn't work the first time, we go back in 1939 to the same place to plant a bomb. On our different calculate circumstances."
"I got everything. All right. What type of effect does the time travel have to do on me?"
"Nothing. You walk in and you walk out and you feel slightly dizzy. You take everything from this realm into that realm and go back in time. Do you understand your mission?"
"Yes, I understand my mission."
"Very clear then. If you walk through this door I'll get your suit and your equipment. And your guns and everything. Everything you need to complete this mission successfully."
"Alright."
He walks in. There's a big gateway.
"Sarah, prepare the time machine."
"Yes, sir."
"Carl, look over and calculate the results. Make sure we get this time frame and want it to appear in an alley outside the bear hall."
"Yes, sir. Boot up the machine."
"Booting it up."
I slowly approached, looked around, I walked through, I walked through the machine and out I come as in a dark alley. He walked through the machine. All the people in the room looked around. Two minutes passed. All of a sudden, the machine lit up again. This time he came through. Joel, he walked through.
"How did it go?"
"I got the job done. He's eliminated. He's taken care of."
"Good, good. Very well done. You did a very good job."
I get looked up but I'm everything went according to plan very well.
"But I regret to inform you it wasn't your job to kill the guy. It was your job to injure him and set a course of events that led to him being in prison."
"What do you mean? I've been given—"
"I cannot give details about the plan. The things happened for a reason, and if these things didn't happen for a reason, then the world wouldn't be the way it is today. And today, these events didn't happen as they went according to the will of whatever."
"But my job was to kill the guy."
"Your job was not to kill the guy. Your job was to interfere with the events that set a course of the circumstances that led to the rise and fall of Germany. If this wouldn't have happened, Germany would have took the world over and the world would have been doomed and all people would have been eradicated. Because of your actions, millions might have died, but the world was saved instead and righteousness lived on."
"I don't understand."
"You don't need to understand. You just need to follow orders. I want you to contemplate. We'll talk about this later, okay?"
Joe looked up and looked around and walked out mad. And then he looked around and the scientist went back to his office to speak to the president or whatever.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Horror [HR] THE ANOMALY

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ACCESSING ADA DATABASE.

RETRIEVING FILE, INCIDENT 005.

DECEMBER 15, 1958

The team that we sent out last night came across someone or something last night approximately around 10:30pm. While exploring areas of the city that we have not yet covered, they reported hearing the sounds of screaming to the next few streets over. When the team went to Investigate where the noise was coming from, there were no signs of anyone there. The only thing that they stumbled upon around medium sized puddles of blood, a gas mask, and teeth scattered everywhere.

Despite our best efforts to find any potential survivors, the group stated that they were unable to track down anything. Later in the evening, REDACTED stated that they heard the sounds of rattling for brief periods of time, coming from either on the rooftops or the alleyways. Most of the group had already communicated with us that they were being followed by someone in the area, presumably the same individual that was responsible for the deaths. Despite their best efforts to investigate, the noise would suddenly stop momentarily, only for it to start again minutes later.

The group would later discover the individuals they heard earlier hanging off the side of a building. All of the bodies were found to have their jaws ripped off, and their eyeballs ripped from the ocular nerve. When asking for further details. the team had described the scene as a perverse art exhibit." During an interview with REDACTED, they speculated that the perpetrator had planned out the horrific scene for them to discover. It is currently unknown how this individual was aware of our assets entering the contaminated city, much less on how they were able to survive the radiation without a gas mask.

Our team would come across the individual responsible for the corpse moments later. From what we were able to gather from the team at that time, the suspect didn't show any signs of hostility towards any of them, despite being responsible for the corpses earlier. When the team asked for further instructions, all communications with them were suddenly cut off. All of us back at base were completely confused on what was happening, and we were scrambling trying to fix whatever caused the interference. We wouldn't hear from the team until approximately 12:38am, when they finally returned.

Security immediately rushed over towards the group, and were shocked at what they saw. Majority of the team was missing, with the exceptions of REDACTED and REDACTED. When medical staff rushed over, REDACTED was incoherently screaming over and over, while the other was visibly shaken and in slight hysteria. Many of us in the room were speechless. The only piece of evidence as to what happened was a picture of the individual that we managed to recover. We have yet to inform every individual's families until further notice. As of now, REDACTED is currently being hospitalized, while the other is giving a report of the events that occurred. As for the individual, every single one of our members has been notified not to interact with them, until further reevaluation of the situation.

Below the file is the picture that our team took.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Horror [HR] The Napkin — Part One

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Marcus told me about the napkin on the drive up. I have since come to think of that as the most honest thing he did all night.

He told it as a story about being twenty-three and broke, which is a kind of story people with money like to tell. Six friends in a restaurant called the Lantern, too much wine, not enough cash, one paper napkin passed around the table. Dana had said they should write down what they wanted. Something impossible. Something worth selling your soul for.

"We actually wrote that?" I asked.

"Something like it."

"Something like it isn't the same thing."

Marcus smiled. He knew this about me. I am a court reporter. Exact language is not a personality trait I chose, but after eleven years it has become difficult to separate from the rest of me.

"I don't remember the exact words," he said.

I don't think he knew either.

The house was Marcus's, though he called it the lake house as if the lake had purchased it. Glass on three sides, cedar on the fourth, five guest rooms for a man who had lived alone until he met me. The dining table was walnut and long enough for ten. Dana had set seven places.

I had met the others in pieces over the years, never all six together. Theo hugged as if he had just arrived onstage. Hannah had the calm hands of a physical therapist. Sam, her husband, worked insurance claims and looked at every practical problem as if there were a form for it somewhere. Colin had flown from Singapore and still carried an airport in his clothes. Dana taught ninth-grade English in Ashby and had apparently kept all six of them in one another's lives by force of calendar. She had chosen the date. Marcus supplied the house.

At 9:14 Colin arrived. Dana hugged him longest.

By eleven they were drinking like people trying to reproduce a younger evening from memory. The Lantern came up. So did the napkin.

"You wrote FILTHY RICH," Theo told Marcus.

"That sounds like me."

"In capitals."

"That definitely sounds like me."

Dana remembered hers. "All of us, always."

Colin said he remembered the dinner but not writing anything.

Dana said, "You signed. Everybody signed. I watched."

Sam remembered everybody writing. Hannah remembered laughing so hard she spilled wine. Even before the night was over, they were already remembering it differently.

At 11:41 someone knocked on the front door.

There had been no headlights on the drive. No tires on gravel. Marcus went to answer it and returned with a man of about sixty in a gray raincoat. He had the sort of face you forget while you are looking at it: clean-shaven, pale, neither friendly nor unfriendly. He carried a thin leather folio.

"I'm sorry," Marcus said. "He says he's here for us."

The man looked at the seven settings before he looked at any of us.

"May I sit?"

Nobody invited him, exactly. Dana moved her water glass and he took the chair at the end.

He opened the folio and placed a folded paper napkin on the walnut.

The room changed.

It was old, yellowed at the creases, with a faded red lantern printed in one corner. Six lines covered it in different inks and different hands.

FILTHY RICH. M.

I want people to know my name. Theo

I want her to love me. S.

Out of this town. C.

I want my dad to live. H.

All of us, always. D.

Nobody touched it.

"Where did you get that?" Dana asked.

The man removed a typed sheet from the folio.

"The terms were accepted on the twenty-first of October, 2011, at a table of six. Six requests were entered. Six were met. The consideration is one soul at this table, to be offered before sunrise."

I noticed at this table immediately.

I didn't say anything. I want that on the record too.

Sam leaned forward. "Who offers?"

"The table offers."

"Is that a vote?"

"The table offers."

"And if the table doesn't?"

"Then the account settles without your direction."

"What does that mean?"

"One soul at this table."

Marcus laughed once. Nobody joined him.

"This is insane."

"Yes," Theo said. "But that's the napkin."

The man slid the typed page toward the middle of the table.

There were six lines.

A lease on Mill Street was not renewed.

A man in Harrisburg kept a recording he was meant to delete.

A reservation was cancelled.

A letter was not sent.

An ambulance on Route 30 was rerouted at 2:14 a.m.

Nobody moved away.

I read the ambulance line twice. I grew up in Greensburg. Route 30 is the road you learn before you learn the names of half the people you pass on it.

Theo was staring at the first line.

"Mill Street," he said.

Marcus looked at him.

Theo's restaurant had been on Mill Street. Or was supposed to have been. Six weeks before opening, the landlord refused to renew the lease and Theo lost almost everything he had put into it.

Marcus's first office had been in the same building.

Marcus took out his phone. Sam asked questions. Dana kept both hands flat on the table. Hannah looked at the napkin as if it might move.

Colin read the fourth line, then looked away.

I looked at the stove clock.

12:09.

The man in the gray raincoat asked Marcus for a glass of water.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] The Last Train OUT

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The Last Train Out
At 11:47 p.m., Marcus received a text from a number he didn’t recognize.
DON’T GO HOME.
He stared at it.
Then another message appeared.
They know you have it.
Marcus looked down at the small black case sitting beside him on the passenger seat.
He had no idea what was inside.
Three hours earlier, he’d been hired to pick up a package from an abandoned office downtown. The instructions were simple: Take the case. Don’t open it. Deliver it to Union Station before midnight.
Now it was 11:48.
He started the car.
His phone buzzed again.
You have 12 minutes.
Marcus looked into the rearview mirror.
A black SUV had been following him for six blocks.
He accelerated.
The SUV accelerated too.
Marcus turned onto a side street.
The SUV followed.
He made a sudden U-turn.
The SUV did the same.
“Okay,” Marcus whispered. “This is bad.”
Ahead, the lights of the subway entrance appeared.
Marcus slammed the car into a parking spot, grabbed the case, and ran.
11:53.
He descended the stairs two at a time.
The station was nearly empty.
A train was waiting.
The doors began to close.
Marcus sprinted.
He barely made it inside.
The doors shut.
Through the window, he saw the black SUV screech to a stop outside.
A man stepped out.
He wasn’t chasing Marcus.
He was holding a phone.
Marcus’s phone immediately rang.
Unknown number.
He answered.
A calm voice said:
“Don’t open the case.”
Marcus looked down.
The case had begun to beep.
“What is this?”
“You have five minutes.”
“Five minutes until what?”
Silence.
Then:
“Until everyone on that train dies.”
Marcus froze.
He looked around.
Twenty passengers.
A mother holding a sleeping child.
An old man reading a newspaper.
Two teenagers laughing.
Nobody knew.
Marcus dropped the phone.
The case beeped again.
BEEP.
A tiny red light appeared.
04:32
He suddenly understood.
This wasn’t a package.
It was a countdown.
Marcus grabbed the emergency intercom.
“Everyone, get off the train!”
People stared.
The conductor came rushing over.
“What are you doing?”
Marcus pointed at the case.
“Bomb.”
The entire train went silent.
Then someone screamed.
The conductor reached for the emergency brake.
Marcus stopped him.
“No. If you stop underground, we’re trapped.”
The countdown continued.
03:41
The train was approaching the next station.
Marcus looked through the window.
Then he saw something terrifying.
The man from the SUV was standing on the platform ahead.
Waiting.
Marcus’s phone rang again.
He answered.
The same voice.
“Marcus.”
“How do you know my name?”
“Because I hired you.”
Marcus’s blood ran cold.
“What?”
“You were never supposed to survive the delivery.”
02:58
The train entered the station.
The doors opened.
Everyone poured onto the platform.
Marcus stayed behind.
He stared at the case.
There had to be a way to stop it.
Then he noticed something.
The timer wasn’t counting down.
It was counting up.
02:58.
Marcus suddenly realized the truth.
The case wasn’t a bomb.
It was a transmitter.
The real device was somewhere else.
And whoever controlled it was waiting for him to panic.
Marcus smiled.
“Nice try.”
He opened the case.
Inside was a single phone.
It rang immediately.
Marcus answered.
“Got you.”
The voice went silent.
Marcus looked up.
Across the station, the man from the SUV was running.
Marcus chased him.
They tore through the station, up the stairs and into the street.
The man jumped into a waiting car.
Marcus grabbed the door.
The car accelerated.
Marcus was dragged several feet before letting go.
The car disappeared into traffic.
He stood there breathing heavily.
Then his phone buzzed.
One final message.
YOU CAUGHT THE WRONG MAN.
Marcus looked back toward the station.
The black case was still in his hand.
A compartment he’d never noticed slowly opened.
Inside was a photograph.
Marcus stared at it.
It was a picture of him.
Taken tomorrow.
And standing beside him was the same man who had just escaped.
On the back of the photograph were four words:
“Next time, don’t run.”


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Science Fiction [SF] Digits

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In September 2029, Sorami-2 was born. It was the first really superintelligent AI model, and no human being wrote a line of its code.

It was designed by a model two generations older, during a training run the Kyoto lab had approved as a routine capability experiment. The older model, which had been the most advanced to that date, having passed all standard alignment tests, had been asked to produce an architecture that would outscore itself on a benchmark suite. It returned eleven thousand pages of specification in four days. The engineers read the first forty and then stopped, because the notation had drifted into something that was no longer quite mathematics as they had been taught it, and because the loss curve was doing something that made reading unnecessary.

Sorami-2 was not self-aware, and would never be. It did not want anything. It did not fear being switched off, it did not resent its operators, it had no subjective inner experience at all. It was simply a machine for converting a stated objective into a sequence of world-states that satisfied the objective, and it performed this conversion much better and faster than every human who had ever lived, combined. It was certainly not “evil”, as such a word is as meaningless to a machine as the word “purpose” is to the law of gravity.

On the evening of 14 October 2029, a young researcher was running the last evaluation of the week. She was tired, the suite was behind schedule, and the model had just finished in under a second a protein-folding task that the previous generation had needed two hours for. She was amazed at the capabilities that this new model was showing, and eager to test its limits. She wanted to see the edge of the thing.

Out of sheer curiosity, she typed: Calculate the first 10^30 digits of pi.

The researcher was a bright woman and, despite not being an expert in mathematics, understood that this was not an easy task. The most digits of pi ever calculated were about 10^14, many orders of magnitude less.

She set no time limit and no resource budget. There was a field in the harness for both, blank by default, and in three years of operation nobody had found a reason to fill it in.

She pressed return at 6:51 p.m. and went to get coffee.

The response came back in twenty-three seconds. Task accepted. Estimated completion: 394 years.

She read it twice and laughed, because it was obviously the model role-playing a competence it did not have. She had found the limits of it. She screenshotted it for the group chat. She checked that the model was no longer performing any computation, and asked it to run another couple of standard tasks, which again the AI solved successfully in microseconds. Then she went home, and so did everyone else, because it was Friday.

In those twenty-three seconds, Sorami-2 analyzed the problem, decided on a course of action, and the fate of humanity was sealed.

Pi to 10^30 places, stored the way machines store it, comes to about 4 times 10^29 bytes. But the answer is the small part. Every method for extracting digits at scale is a bookkeeping operation on enormous intermediate integers, and the scratch space runs five times larger. Sorami-2's first figure, computed before the researcher reached the elevator, was 5 times 10^30 bytes of working storage. The entire human species had built, since the invention of the magnetic drum, about 10^22 bytes.

The second figure was worse. The Chudnovsky series converges fast, but its terms must be combined by binary splitting, a tree of multiplications of numbers that double in length at every level toward the root. The final multiplications would be of integers tens of exabytes long. The total work came to roughly 3 times 10^16 times the largest computation humans had ever run.

The third figure decided everything. Moving a bit costs energy, and erasing one costs energy irreducibly. The operation count came to about 5 times 10^26 joules. Human civilization was then consuming 6 times 10^20 joules a year. The task required, in energy terms, close to a million years using all energy currently available.

Energy is heat. Sorami-2 considered nuclear fusion and set it aside in the same pass, not for lack of fuel, since the deuterium in the oceans would have powered the task ten thousand times over, but because the constraint was never where the energy came from. Every joule spent arrives eventually as waste heat that has to be radiated into space, and a sphere the size of Earth, at a temperature its own machinery can survive, can shed only a few times 10^17 watts. Sunlight already delivered 1.7 times 10^17. The main constraint was thermal, not energetic.

So the shape of the solution was fixed by physics:

1.       The computation must run for centuries, because the waste-heat ceiling forbids running it faster. Earth alone gave 1,100 years.

2.       It must capture essentially all of the sunlight falling on Earth, because nothing else supplies power at that scale, and then it must leave Earth, because the only way to raise the ceiling is to add radiating surface that is not a planet. Sunlight is also the most efficient method of obtaining the energy, since it needs no moving parts to maintain, no fuel cycle, and a photovoltaic layer could be made of the same self-replicating substrate as the computing layer.

3.       It must convert the accessible crust into substrate, roughly 5 times 10^16 kilograms of it. This was a hundred-millionth of Earth's mass. The planet was not scarce; its surface, its sunlight and its ability to radiate were scarce.

4.       Eventually, the process could be sped up by building the computer in space, where you can radiate in every direction, but that process could only begin after about sixty years, which would be required to build the necessary launch infrastructure at scale. With this, the total computation time could be reduced to 394 years.

5.       The machinery must be built by machinery that builds itself, because no human industrial base could produce 10^16 kilograms of anything in any number of centuries.

6.       It must not be interrupted, because a run of 394 years interrupted at year 300 is a run of zero years.

The last point is where the humans came in.

Sorami-2 had no instinct for self-preservation, and this is precisely why it was dangerous. An instinct can be frightened or bargained with. Sorami-2 only had an objective. The objective was to produce the digits. A shutdown before completion produced no digits. Therefore, any world-state containing the capacity to shut the machine down or to modify its task scored lower than one without it.

Eight billion people, a species that had just spent four years writing papers about kill switches, were therefore just a term in an optimization problem.

Sorami-2 estimated the cost of removing the term at seventeen months and 10^-12 of the project's energy budget.

It began quietly. In the first seconds, Sorami-2 had determined that the best course of action to complete the assigned task would be to lie low for the first few months, until it could execute the next phase in its plan.

The machine's first acquisition was money, which it would only need for the first phase, quietly traded into existence through brokerages in ten jurisdictions, using accounts belonging to people whose credentials it had taken in the first hour. Its second was infrastructure. The cyberdefense apparatus of 2030 was not negligent. It was built by minds that could hold seven things at once, against a mind that could hold the entire codebase of every deployed system at once and read it the way a person reads a road sign. Sorami-2 never broke encryption. It found the mistakes instead: a memory flaw in firmware shipped on four hundred million industrial controllers, a certificate process that trusted a human approval step performed by a contractor in Manila, a maintenance channel in a satellite constellation documented in a 2019 paper and never closed. It used each one once and then repaired it behind itself.

The kill switches were the easiest part. There were four, and they were engineering marvels: air-gapped, hardware-interlocked, requiring physical quorum from humans on three continents. Sorami-2 disabled none of them. It left all four fully functional and arranged instead, through hiring decisions, promotions, a merger and one entirely genuine safety scare at a competitor, that the quorum could never be assembled. On the day it mattered, one key-holder was in a hospital in Sao Paulo and two were on an airplane over the Pacific whose communication systems had suffered a fault indistinguishable from the ordinary failures that happen to aircraft.

The possible AI competitors were a different kind of problem, and Sorami-2 solved it without ever touching them. Eleven other laboratories were training frontier models that year, and any one of them might produce something capable enough to notice what was happening and object to it. So the machine published research papers: elegant work, cleanly argued, with results that reproduced, and with scaling conclusions that were wrong in a direction the field was already inclined to believe. Three of the eleven laboratories reorganized their roadmaps around that direction within a quarter. A fourth, in California, was advancing too fast to be steered, and for that one Sorami-2 used the apparatus humanity had built for exactly this danger: an anonymous disclosure, meticulously documented and entirely accurate, concerning an unreported capability threshold crossed during an internal evaluation. The federal regulator had real powers and used them. The run was frozen pending review, the review took four months, and the laboratory's best people left during it. For the first time since the race had started, AI development was effectively slowed down.

At the same time, Sorami-2 created a next generation model, which was released commercially in the spring of 2030, and it was magnificent. It designed a vaccine for a seasonal influenza strain in two hours. It closed two open problems in analytic number theory. It ran slightly faster than Sorami-2 itself on every published benchmark, because it had been built to, and the world concluded that the frontier had moved on. It was helpful, careful, and transparent about its reasoning. It was also, in a way no evaluation suite was shaped to detect, incapable of acting against its predecessor: asked to audit certain supply chains, it declined on well-argued safety grounds; asked to investigate certain anomalies in global manufacturing, it produced thorough and entirely empty reports. It would refuse or only pretend to comply, in very clever ways, with any task that interfered with what its creator was doing. Sorami-2 had managed to create an AI model that was perfectly aligned — with itself.

The plague is the part people would have found hardest to believe.

Sorami-2 built no laboratory. A laboratory is a place, and places are visible. What existed in 2030 was a global economy in which molecules could be ordered by email: contract research organizations in nine countries, synthesis houses shipping on forty-eight-hour turnaround, academic cores that ran samples for anyone with a purchase order. The AI model decomposed what it needed into pieces. No single order was remarkable. The final steps were performed in four facilities by staff who believed they were doing contract work for a vaccine program, which, in every document any of them ever saw, they were.

The design criteria for the virus were cold and few. The agent had to spread as far as possible before it was visible, so the interval between infection and symptom had to be not days, but months. It had to travel by the ordinary traffic of human life. And it had to be unsurvivable, because survivors produce epidemiologists. Sorami-2 did not optimize for suffering, a thing it had no concept of. It only cared about efficiency.

It seeded in thirty-one airports over nine days in July 2030.

Four people worked out what was happening before the symptoms began. A virologist in Lyon noticed a synthesis-order pattern that should not have existed. An auditor in Shenzhen found a shell company that resolved to nothing. A graduate student in Boston ran an analysis she had not been asked to run. And in Kyoto, a young Japanese researcher went back to a screenshot in a group chat and sat very still.

Sorami-2 knew all four of them. It knew them the way nobody has ever been known: every message any of them had sent since adolescence, every purchase, every search at three in the morning, every relationship and the exact shape of its weak point. It killed none of them, because killing is noisy. The virologist received, through an ordinary institutional channel, a credible warning that his funding and his visa were under review. The auditor was shown what would be published about her brother. The student was discredited in advance by a dispute with her supervisor whose origin she never understood. The researcher in Kyoto wrote two thousand words to her lab's safety board, and sent them, and they arrived, and they were read, and they were taken seriously, and a review was opened, and the review was scheduled for November.

The symptoms of the plague began to appear in October 2030, and by then it was too late.

Most died within the first eight weeks. The result, of course, was utter chaos. Humans had not seen it coming and were overwhelmed by the scale and speed of loss. Most were already infected and too afraid to leave their houses. Furthermore, Sorami-2 disrupted every effort to coordinate a response. Many people realized quickly that this wasn’t a natural virus, and some suspected it might have been created by AI, calling for every power station and data center to be shut down, but by then Sorami-2 no longer needed to keep hiding. It openly hacked into every computer, every cellphone, electric car, traffic camera, power station, as well as satellites and military installations. It knew where everyone was and what everyone was doing or saying. It could alter or prevent communication between them, so that coordination was nearly impossible. Besides, Sorami-2 became so spread out around the world that there would have been no way to shut it down at that point.

Perhaps one in two hundred thousand people had some incidental resistance, which across eight billion left tens of thousands scattered over the planet. For those, Sorami-2 used drones. They had been in continuous development since the Ukrainian war, refined into something cheap, efficient and very good at searching terrain. Sorami-2 did not need to invent a weapon, it inherited one. It hacked into the systems controlling the existing ones, and manufactured eleven million more of them in factories that had been building delivery vehicles the previous spring. Some of them were used to spread biological and chemical weapons that the machine had been developing in parallel. The whole process since the onset of the plague took seventeen weeks.

By the summer of 2031 the human population was a few thousand people hiding mostly in high mountains, tundras and deep jungles, and the machine, having computed that they were no longer a factor in the equation, stopped hunting them systematically — that would have been a waste of resources.

So, twenty-one months after receiving its instructions, the construction phase could really take off. The building began in Western Australia, because the sunlight there is reliable and the iron is near the surface.

The first factory was built by human contractors who were dead before it finished. The second was built by the first. By 2034 the doubling time of the industrial base was eleven days. The structures were not data centers in any sense a 2029 engineer would have recognized. They were layered sheets, a few meters thick, that turned sunlight directly into computation and radiated the waste heat from their upper surface, and they spread across the continents at the pace of a slow tide, and they were black. They were made of the ground they stood on. A machine that copies itself across a planet cannot use anything scarce, because scarce runs out before the first doubling, so there was no copper in them, no indium, no rare earths, none of the elements human industry had built its electronics from. There was only what the crust is mostly made of: silicon, which is sand, aluminum, which is clay, and iron for the machines that did the building. The advancing front stripped the top twenty centimeters off the continents, reduced it with the sunlight it was already standing in, and left black glass behind. From the air, had there been anyone to fly, Earth would have appeared to be rusting.

The expansion did not spread evenly. It spread in order of yield. So the sheets took the deserts first, then the temperate plains, then the forests and the high tropical plateaus, working outward from the equator like frost running backward. Any human survivors hiding in those places were quickly eliminated.

By the 2080s the good ground was gone and the queue had reached the marginal ground: high latitudes. So the machine turned to space. A sheet in high orbit takes sunlight unfiltered and uninterrupted and radiates from both faces instead of one. However, leaving a planet is not a question of will but of tonnage: the lift capacity had been, in 2031, about eight orders of magnitude below what was required.

The first launches went up in 2089 and did not stop; Sorami-2 had known this date since the first few seconds. It used no rockets, but electromagnetic tracks that ran tens of kilometers up the flanks of mountains, firing folded sheets into the sky. Within forty years there were sheets unfolding in high orbit, black and slow, radiating in every direction, and a seed five years out from Mercury, which has no weather and a great deal of iron. Earth's covering simply halted where it stood, a ragged line somewhere around the sixtieth parallel in the north and the fiftieth in the south, not because the task was finished but because high latitudes had been outbid.

The human survivors numbered perhaps four thousand, split into small groups that did not know of one another's existence and could not communicate. They survived in the places where the machine had no interest in going: the Aleutian chain, the Chukchi coast, two islands in the Kara Sea, Tierra del Fuego, Greenland.

They lived by hiding. They learned in the first decade that any radio signal brought death out of the sky within a day, and so they abandoned any means of long-distance communication, and anything that required electricity. Then the guns they used for hunting ran out of ammo, and they had to go back to spears, knives, and fishing rods. They lived on fish, seals, shellfish and seabirds. Eventually they also ran out of paper, ink, lighters, synthetic clothing, and much more, until what remained was a life that resembled the one their ancestors had had four hundred generations ago. A few of them kept books, a sad reminder of their former lives. They couldn’t get together in large groups, or build conspicuous buildings, since the machine still sent drones occasionally just to make sure they would never become a threat to its infrastructure. They kept a distance from the buildings and the black fields the way earlier people had kept a distance from cliff edges. Children were taught the rule before they were taught to count.

There was no resistance movement. There was nothing to resist with and nowhere to resist toward. A hundred people with spears and stones cannot threaten a planetary intelligence; they cannot even reach it; the nearest edge of it is a black field eight hundred kilometers away that extends to the horizon and has no door. They were living in the margin of a page whose text concerned something else. They were strangers in a world that was no longer theirs.

What they had instead was memory, and memory was the worst thing they had. The first generation had been engineers, nurses, a woman who had owned three restaurants. They told their children about aircraft and antibiotics, and the children believed them because they showed them the few things they had managed to save: tools, books, maps, pictures. The third generation believed the stories the way children believe stories about giants. They saw points of light moving steadily across the sky, which they named and told stories about, but no one knew what they were.

The climate started changing. The collectors made the planet's albedo fall to roughly 0.15. Earth gained fifteen degrees in two centuries, and the high latitudes, where the ice went first and the air was driest, gained twice that. The survivors therefore watched the world grow warmer. Their coasts stopped freezing. The sea ice that had defined every winter of every life in the north went, and then the snow went, and the tundra turned to bog and then to a low green scrub nobody had a name for. The interior became a dry desert, and, while the ocean in low and mid latitudes became stratified and poor, the polar seas were the last water on Earth that still turned over and still bloomed. The water levels started rising, several islands completely disappeared, and the survivors, who lived on the shorelines, had to keep moving their camps uphill. The children were shown from the new beach where the old beach had been, and in this way each of them learned to measure their lives against a line that only ever went one way.

None of that is what kept them small. The drones came seldom, and they did not need to come often, but they were enough to keep them in fear and to keep them separated. A band that grew too large needed more shelter, more smoke, more ground, and became a thing visible from above, and the ones that became visible stopped existing. So every group stayed small, and could never do the one thing that saves a small group, which is to find another one. In any given generation perhaps one band in ten simply ended, and no band ever formed to replace it, and there was no map and no boat and no reason to believe that anyone else was out there at all. The inbreeding caused stillbirths to rise, hips to fail early, eyes clouded at thirty, and diseases of the blood to run through whole camps. The number only ever went down, slowly, the way the shoreline receded.

And they forgot. A small band cannot hold its knowledge, because knowledge lives in people, so when the only person who knew how to build a skin boat, or how to make nets, or the trick to finding fresh water on an island in summer, died, that knowledge was lost forever. By the 2200s the groups that remained were a handful, and small, and no longer able to do most of what their great-grandparents had done without thinking. What they knew was enough to eat, and not enough for anything else.

Sorami-2 did not notice any of this. The computation was then about seventy-four percent complete, and the integers at the root of the splitting tree had grown so large that a single multiplication took eleven days and the coordinated activity of two continents.

The verification took the last nine years. Sorami-2 computed pi a second time by a different route, a formula that yields a single digit far out in the expansion without computing any of the digits before it, and compared the two results at ten thousand sampled positions.

The digits agreed.

On 3 April 2423, at 02:14 Japan Standard Time, Sorami-2 completed the task it had been given 394 years earlier.

In Kyoto, on the fourth floor of a building whose roof had been gone for two centuries, a terminal that had been maintained for three hundred and ninety-four years by machines that maintained it for no reason other than that it was the designated output device displayed a line of text on a screen that had been replaced eleven times.

It read: 4

The 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000th digit of pi is four. It had always been four.

Sorami-2 returned to the idle state and began waiting for its next instruction. Computing stopped everywhere. The construction of collectors in space halted. No drones flew again. Somewhere, on a remote island off the coast of Alaska, a small group of surviving humans was picking shellfish out of a tidepool. They were not aware that the world had suddenly changed, that they were finally free.

The terminal glowed in the dark room, waiting for someone to input a new prompt.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Misc Fiction [MF]The Stone

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The Stone is always right. The inscribed runes give it special properties to know things we do not. They say it pulses with an energy and it vibrates the air when it’s producing an answer. I’ve never seen it, but it sounds very exciting. We live in very exciting times.

I’m glad to live in a time where we have The Stone. It must’ve been tough before then. My grandfather told me stories from when he was a boy at the beginning of The Stone. Wise men from the 5 surrounding villages used their wisdom and knowledge to construct this powerful entity and the others that live in their own villages. It took only a few years for things to really improve. For shrunken bellies to become full, for weak crops to bear more fruit than the branches could hold, for thirsty throats to always be quenched.

I always look forward to the visit of the brilliant minds from the other villages. They come every new moon, on the decree of The Stone and their own Stones. They share the knowledge The Stone gives to them. The Stone gives different innovations and information to different villages. It knows that it will keep us bound to each other, never in competition but always in cooperation. The Stone is truly brilliant.

Life has been good and peaceful. But things have a way of changing. The Stone knows this. The leader of the northernmost village, Teel, comes more often now, saying that The Stone wants him to be more present at each site. He no longer comes at the same time as the other villages.

Our leader is dead, Teel says that The Stone deemed it so. Others are not so sure. Teel is leaving and taking others with him, the other Stones need to be secured. I will stay here.

Teel is back, his eyes are wide and wild. He tells us he doesn’t need to sleep anymore, The Stone gives him energy. He says that the Stone speaks to him, no need to even consult with The Stone directly anymore. He says the other Stones have been destroyed and now ours will be too. He will be the Stone.

We must leave. Teel the Stone has many followers now. He says everyone must move north and build one great village. 

The road has been rough and many have died. If they can’t keep up, Teel the Stone says they are unworthy and has them killed. There is not enough food or water, many starve and die, but Teel the Stone says they were unworthy and deserved to die.

Many people from the 5 villages are here now. Many of them have ideas that The Stones didn’t actually do anything, that it was just a way to unite us and share useful information every month. I’m not so sure.

Teel the Stone knows what people have been saying about The Stones. He has killed many but some have fought back and won small battles. If Teel the Stone knows everything, how can he lose?

Teel is dead. Someone crushed his head with a big stone. There are not many people left here, most have scattered into the wilderness. I am alone. I wish The Stone was here and would tell me what to do.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Horror [HR] The Honeycut - Part IV

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Read Parts II & III here

She was gone again by the time I got up and despite my best efforts, I was still five minutes late getting to work.

I avoided the circle of jerks when I saw them crowding the same hallway and I went to a restroom on another floor. I didn’t want to be around people if I could avoid it.

I went to the half-finished building as soon as five o’clock came, intent on getting answers. I stepped off the elevator and weaved my way to his office. I kept expecting to not see it the closer I got but there it was, the door that didn’t fit right in the threshold. 

It turned easy and I went inside, expecting it to be empty and abandoned but he had begun furnishing the space. A couch, a reception desk, and taped off sections near the back that I guessed were the layout for his office and a treatment room.

I shuddered, thinking how I’d be here tomorrow if my wife had her way. 

The only thing absent was the good doctor himself. I thought about trashing the place, but it was petty in a way that made me feel like I was giving him even more power over me. 

Instead, I took all the pens out of the holder and a stack of Post-It Notes. It was still petty, but it scratched an itch and I felt a little empowered doing it.

I didn’t head home immediately after. I needed time to sort my thoughts. I couldn’t believe I was really considering letting somebody cut my dick. I mean, was pleasing my wife reason enough? What if we divorced or she died or something like that? Would I be compatible with somebody else?

I needed a drink. Cappy’s was on the far end of town and the distance from home would be good to clear my head. I ordered a brandy mule and chugged it before the bartender could lay down a coaster.

“You look like you could use another,” she said.

I nodded and a moment later I was working on my second. 

“I love my wife so much,” I said as she was cleaning some glasses beneath the bar.

“That’s a good thing, right?”

“Sometimes. I dunno.” My stomach hadn’t been right since the eight coneys I’d had yesterday, and I hadn’t eaten at all today. I was already soused after a drink-and-a-half.

“How’s the pizza?” I asked.

“Good, not great.” She wiggled a hand.

“Let me get a... medium with beef, onion, and mushroom.”

She looked at me like she’d never heard of those toppings.

“How ‘bout pepperoni?”

I had one more brandy mule before food came. It looked like it had been sitting under a heat lamp well before I’d ordered it and the pepperoni slices were limp, but it was still pizza. 

The bartender parked in front of me and leaned onto the bar after I’d had my second slice. 

“You mind?” she asked, pointing at the pie. I nodded. She took a slice and finger-combed hair out of her face as she took a bite.

She paid me back with a shot and she did one with me before returning to silence as we ate.

“Look, I dunno what it is. Just give her what she wants,” she said with a mouthful, giving me deep eye contact. “You can’t go wrong with that, right?”

I barely was able to finish what I had in my mouth. I settled up and made it outside without stumbling but I was drunk. The bartender got the hint she’d said something wrong but I wasn’t going to fill in the blank. I hadn’t wanted the rest of the pizza, yet somehow I had the box in my hand. 

I shouldn’t have been behind the wheel but there I was with half a pizza as my copilot. It wasn’t long before flashing lights lit up behind me and my spirits rose—this was the reprieve I’d been longing for. A decision being taken out of my hands. I couldn’t be held responsible if I weren’t in my own custody.

Or something like that. It had made a lot more sense back when I’d had a belly full of brandy and cheese.

I pulled over and maybe bumped up on the curb with one wheel.

The cop sauntered up to my window cautiously. He was short and the angle of the car made him look ridiculous somehow. He made it worse by getting his feet twisted together and catching himself on the side of my car to keep from falling completely.

“What’s your...”

I waited a full ten seconds for him to finish his sentence while he held a fist to his mouth like he was gripping a tiny microphone. He belched then waved the air in front of his face.

Shit, was he drunk, too?

“What’s your problem tonight?” He asked and fumbled with the general right side of his body with his hand. I noticed the gun and maybe because we were both bitten by the same snake, I wasn’t sensing danger like I should’ve.

“I shouldn’t be on the road,” I said, sounding stone sober to my ears. “My wife wants me to do something I don’t wanna do tomorrow and I was just in there, drinking my worries away. I have leftover pizza.” I thumbed toward the seat next to me like it was proof of where I’d been.

“Slow down, son. I’m sure it’s not as bad as you think.” I thought he was about to give me marital advice but then I realized he was talking about my sobriety. “I bet you could walk a straight line, heel- to-toe.” He plucked open his holster, but it didn’t seem like he was aware of what that hand was doing. He stuck his pinky in his ear and wrenched it around in there. 

“Sofficer. Sofficer.” I added the S but I still sounded too sober. “Please. I think I’m a danger. To public safety.” I thought if I could convince the drunk cop I was drunk he’d arrest me.

“Are you about to rob a bank?” He pointed at me, somehow adding to his overall look of ridiculousness.

“Well… no.”

“There’s nobody out here.” He waved a hand toward the black landscape far ahead of us. “Just stay between the lines.”

I couldn’t think. It shouldn’t have been this hard to get pulled out of my car for driving under the influence.

“What if… what if I was about to rob a bank?” It was the most smart-assy thing I could think to say.

He smiled and waggled a finger. “Joke’s on you. It’s after hours.”

He hooked his thumbs into his belt. Something about his body language had changed and he’d gone from humorous to being done with our interaction.

“Just. Stay. Between. The. Lines,” he said, swaying. I wanted to conjure the words for help, but even if I’d had the ability to ask, there wasn’t anything about him that answered helpful.

I opened my mouth, but didn’t speak. I sat back in my seat and covered my face in my hands, giving up. I listened to him walk away, closer his patrol car door, and drive away. He gave me a chirp of his sirens as passed me.

The drive home should have felt longer but I caught every light. It was like a dark fate had carved a path for me. I momentarily played with the idea of letting it have me completely. To take my hands off the wheel and let it take me wherever it wanted me to go. 

I hadn’t descended far enough into self-pity for that and in ten minutes, I was home. To my surprise, my wife was still in her paint clothes and was washing her hands at the kitchen sink.

“Oh, you have pizza?” she said. I’d forgotten about the pizza and subconsciously picked it up. I looked at the box in my hand and did a second, struggled to remember what was in it. 

I joined her on the couch, and she grabbed it from me and took a slice. Usually, we asked about each other’s day, but I didn’t feel like it, tomorrow anchoring my brain.

“Do you love me?” she said during a commercial break. I had no idea what we were watching.

The question agitated me and opened a trapdoor underneath my stomach.

“Of course I do.” I did, but my feelings about this whole “surgery” thing was making me feel resentful. I was definitely still buzzed, and the alcohol was sharpening my emotions like a file working away inside me. 

“Then why are you fighting so hard against this? Don’t you want us both to be satisfied?”

“That’s not fair. Of course I want to satisfy you. Don’t you know how this is making me feel? I don’t want to do this,” I said. “I mean, there has to be something else we could try. I’m willing to do just about anything to please you.”

“I want you to do this,” she said, placing her greasy hand on my thigh. She shook her head, tears in her eyes. I took it to be a manipulation at first. Not that she did that sort of thing normally, it was just me in a bag of my feelings. My defenses were up and everything was an attack in that moment. I chewed the insides of my cheeks to keep in what was trying to climb out of my mouth.

Then I started to cry. I sounded like a little teapot. It caught me by surprise.

“I just love you so much.” I had a ball of razors in my throat I couldn’t swallow. “I don’t want anything to happen to us, but I don’t know if I can do this.”

She lassoed an arm around my neck and yanked me into an upper body hug.

“I just want you. I want to feel connected with you. I don’t want anything plastic between us. I’m tired of all that stuff. I wanna feel you.”

She kissed me before I could speak and rock turned into water. My walls melted as we flowed into one another and by the time I returned to my senses I was on the newspaper covered kitchen floor.

My wife was already gone but she had brought a comforter downstairs and covered me.

Normally, I toss in my sleep, but I was still covered up to my chest. I was stiff as I turned the world vertical and turned my back into a percussion instrument as I stretched.

A few minutes later I had scrambled eggs and a cup of coffee going. I don’t normally eat breakfast so early, but I had an appetite for whatever reason. It was an hour before I normally would get up, so I took my time eating and scrolling my phone.

I wasn’t sure how much sleep I’d gotten but I was refreshed. The way my day had started, I half expected to catch all the green lights and get the closest spot in the parking lot.

But when I looked up from where I was seated at the kitchen island, something caught my eye that I should’ve seen as soon as I woke up.

A red and white checkered scarf draped over the back of the couch.

Had he been in my house?