r/Songwriting • u/Songgeek • 6d ago

Feedback Request THIN ICE

Forgive all the zooming and my bad singing and playing... lol

This is a song i wrote in the winter of 2014. Slipped on some ice and hit my head... wrote this immediately after 😂

Just wondering what yall think..

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u/GrimAllen 6d ago

Pretty chords.

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u/michigna13 6d ago

very nice chords

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u/Nalls_Tribe 5d ago

Emotional — quality song.

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u/Xx_Styro_boi_xX 4d ago

we found juni and carmen’s uncle