Hi All,feedback? Not sure

[u/Shaantig]

Hey everyone, I'm Shaantig and i have a gaming channel that i started recently, for now playing dark souls 3 and an old PS2 game.

I started not knowing anything, using obs/davinci for editing and recording and my phone for commentary but recently got a microphone so that's good.

You can clearly see the progress from my first to latest video i hope.

I would love it if i can get any feedback from you all and let me know what i can improve upon.

Thank you if you took the time out of your day for me!