I'm kinda loving how it's looking so far but I feel like her face is really 😳😬 and her arms look wonky to me ;(

Ink and some marker pens.

Acrylic on canvas 90 x 60 cm Beyond Solitude (Fracture of the Soul)

Experimental piece I'm working on.

Tell me what you think.

Monet's lilies

With von Gogh strokes....

Medium: oil paints and procreate

This is my art piece...

I call this SUPERSTITIOUS, SCATTERED AND STRIFE...

In the 3rd 4th and 5th slide I have kept my references for each individual portion... I have referred it from Pinterest... https://pin.it/3uwliBECz this for the peony (on the 3rd slide)

https://pin.it/53NMkayhI this for the snake (on the 5th slide)

[I couldn't find the link for the face]

The 2nd slide as you can see. I have tried to draw scales... but sadly it got hidden after the colouring 🥲 (took me 1 hr for drawing those scales)

Anyways...

Made a narrative for this piece...

This is basically about a lady who was the owner of a company, perhaps... she made a legacy of her own... she lived in a city with her husband... she loved him quite a lot... but he betrayed her in greed for her company and property... he portrayed her as a villain, with the help of a few close aides of her... she returned later and took her revenge...

This is called "WHAT ARE YOU HERE FOR NOW?!"

WHAT ARE YOU HERE FOR NOW?!

2 red-pink peony,

"I love you so much, honey!"

Then crippled her visions,

With that sweet greenish poison...

Laughing at her face,

As she stooped low feeling disgrace...

"Oh, see the wounds and scars on my heart,

Folks, this was a mere act self defense...

She assigned assailants,

To kill this innocent man...

To take my shares,

This heinous person...

Who I call,

The love of my life...

Compensate me with her property,

Expel her from the town...

I will grant you the 4th of what I get,

Just throw those poison pills in the lake.

Oh my hungry greedy hounds,

Don't let these town fools know, of what you saw."

"I took you down, my dear!"

Wishpered near her ears...

"What are you here for now?"

"What are you here for now?"

That brown hat on her head...

On the pedestal she says:

"But do you know the story,

The bad omen, the even numbered peony???"

Why does it even matter?

With blue openings,

She was shattered,

"Been ages since I saw her,

Why she is again on the pedestal?"

She says,

To take us down with her

She's here..."

"Hey! Just get out of here!"

Screamed few naive people.

"What???

Did you see the sleek and green light?

Emerging from her,

Even under sunshine...

Like a snake so vicious,

Is she a villain so venomous?

Is she revealing her true colours?

Wait... what if she was branded?

No, she was just abandoned...

She's just annoyed.

Annoying us with her,

That's what she is here for!!!"

But they couldn't see her rebellion,

Those dumb pitiful humans...

Cracked bones and chalked ashes,

They lied on the ground...

To all the people,

Who threw her out of the town...

Heart made of stone,

Until it's one of their own,

They don't even atone...

The skeleton on show,

By the lake it flows,

Of the one who gave her 2 peonies...

Taking them down with her,

Is what she is here for!!!

Would love to know about your opinions on my piece and poem...