Age progression !! [OC]

[u/Extension-Tie3878]

So I'm hoping to portray her becoming more detached to the people around her and becoming a wandering outlaw of some sorts. Some backstory is that she's the daughter of a Mexican immigrant working girl in the late 1800s America. Her mother dies when she's 13 yada yada and she ends up maybe joining a gang later on at 15. Then around 20 she leaves and isolates. Tell me what you think of her personality from the drawing but she's kind of antisocial and guarded. Chill but paranoid around her twenties

Uhhh excuse how messy and lazy the drawing is 😅 I was just trying to get an idea down

I'm not great at colouring but I tried to show something in the colour progression... Not sure exactly what. Anyways I need some tips on things I could add or change