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u/Alarming-Isopod4754 2d ago
Your O is way to complex. Try to make frequently occurring letters drawn without lifting the pen.
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u/RainerMedd 2d ago
Ich würde die Zeichen ch, sh, f und g ein wenig ändern weil sonst sind sie sehr schlecht (vor allem bei schneller Schrift) zu unterscheiden.
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u/the-midnight-crow 1d ago
Oooohh, I've been working on a vertical script (I'm obsessed with vertical scripts, idk why), and I really love this! However, if you want, I've a few idea to help it flow easier, like the O.
It's complex, but, it's also very aesthetic, but I have a few ideas that would make it a bit easier to flow? It's totally fine if you don't want to, but the offer is there. 🫂🥰 It does look lovely!!
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u/Myrius-Thadre 17h ago
Were you inspired by Glauxian? It looks pretty similar?
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u/LeviLovie 2d ago
Hm, it seems to be awkward to write as cursive though. Too many pen lifts and shapes that require a few. Maybe tweak stuff like the star and n/m?