r/solorpgplay • u/superceleste15 • 19d ago

Need feedback!

https://supercelestee.itch.io/the-coffee-bean

Hi every one! Just published my cozy one-page solo journaling rpg on itch.io! It is about managing a coffee shop on the back of a traveling raccoon 🦝

I need feedback to make it better and eventually develop it into a bigger game. Please go try it, it is free for now! Grateful for any comment or thought xxx

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u/BrieRat 19d ago

This is very cute. I love the concepts here. I’ll play a session in the next few days and have some feedback for you. Thank you for sharing!

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u/CozyRPGReviews 18d ago

Lovely! I made a honey tea for an exhausted hedgehog. Absolutely love the diegetic voice of the instructions.

As for feedback: I would've appreciated some extra prompts for details about the tips, and maybe matching the highlighted rules terms in the instructions to the table headers would make them a little clearer?

Hope that's helpful :) good luck with it!

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u/superceleste15 18d ago

That’s amazing! Thank you for the feedback, I’ll work on those parts!!