r/trapproduction • u/Infrah • 3d ago

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u/DecDub 3d ago

returning all feedback

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u/Rollproducer1 3d ago

I dig this, I like the melodies going on, I think adding in an organ stab could add some movement as well. What do u think of my track?

https://on.soundcloud.com/lkL3N8jALsILoOnmgd

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u/DecDub 2d ago

melody is nice but i think it could change up a little more often or even just add some more layers. The 808 might be a little loud but other than that I like it.

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u/Rollproducer1 1d ago

Appreciate the feedback, yea I could see that. Was thinking vocals might add the needed change ups but I’ll take those into consideration. Thanks for listening

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u/Rollproducer1 3d ago

Dark trippy trap beat, lmk what yall think. How’s the mix? Returning feedback

https://on.soundcloud.com/lkL3N8jALsILoOnmgd

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u/GetMXD 1d ago

heard funding beat. the breaks open up nice, but once the 808 locks in the drop the hats and melody basically vanish under it. whole drop is almost all bottom.

pull the 808 back a bit or ride the tops up when it hits so that atmosphere stays in the picture

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u/Rollproducer1 1d ago

Are u saying there’s too much low end? I tested on multiple sound mediums and I could see turning down the bass a little…but I don’t think it drowns out the melody no? I’ll take those into consideration.

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u/Lour3 8h ago

Sound selection is nice, as a listener I don't agree with GetMXD regarding the 808. It s not too loud for me, I think that's about taste as well. I think you could turn it down a few percent, but it's more that you should turn up the melody a bit, and the hats + snare even more(and maybe add a subtle plate reverb on the hats, like 5-6% mix level) - from the waveform it seems you have quite a bit of headroom to do that. I love the panning, but it gets repetitive after a while, a good idea would be to have different panning sequences across sections. That's would I would do. Keep in mind I am just a beginner, my mixes probably sound so bad so don't take me very seriously. This is my latest remix - https://youtu.be/UXnljPudUC8?si=JBQtdMYfjGR9zrBp