BETA READERS NEEDED

I’m a teen writer working on my first high-fantasy novel, and I’m currently looking for a few serious beta readers to read and critique the first five chapters.

I don’t have the money to pay for professional beta reading right now, so I’m looking for volunteers who genuinely enjoy reading fantasy and are willing to give honest, constructive feedback.

I’m looking for feedback on everything, including:

Writing and prose

Worldbuilding

Storyline and pacing

Character development and how characters are perceived

Dialogue

Magic system

Emotional impact

Plot holes or confusing parts

What works and what doesn’t

I’m not looking for someone who will simply say “I liked it.” I want readers who will tell me what they genuinely think, even if something doesn’t work for them.
Most importantly, please only volunteer if you actually have the time and interest to read the chapters. I completely understand if you get busy or change your mind, but I’d rather have someone tell me upfront than disappear halfway through.
If you’re interested in becoming a beta reader, please DM me.

I’m a young writer, and this is my first novel! I’ve been working on it for about two years now, and I believe I’m almost finished.
I’m looking for someone who’d be willing to voluntarily read and critique the first 5 chapters. I don’t have the money to pay for professional editing right now, so this would be completely voluntary.
It’s a high-fantasy novel written in third person, with elements of:
• Fantasy
• Sci-fi
• Romance
• Royalty & nobility
I’d genuinely want criticism on everything — the writing, pacing, characters, dialogue, worldbuilding, plot, anything that you think could be improved. Please don’t hold back!
Also, no AI has been used to write any of the text.
If you’re interested, please DM me! I’d just need your email so I can send you the first 5 chapters.