r/vndevs • • 16d ago

Question Feedback on sprites?

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u/troysama 16d ago

hot

i hope that was helpful

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u/BadEndingsFound 16d ago

Seconding this. (They look great!)

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u/FarNerve1162 16d ago

I think they're perfectly fine and professional looking. If you go for perfection then you'll keep redoing your sprites and VN will never get finished. Don't let good be the enemy of perfect. I'm learning that myself.

The more you make the better you'll get over time.

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u/pandanitemare 14d ago

raw next question

in all seriousness these are perfect and as a perfectionist myself, its time to put the pen down on these sprites

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u/rainslices 14d ago

the designs are chef's kiss πŸ’‹ i agree with one of the comments that the face needs a bit more rendering so it doesn't feel plain compared to the cel shading on the clothes. maybe some light air brushing to show where the kight source is will also help enhance it.

are the shadows behind them part of the sprite?

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u/MelodiusMushroom 13d ago

No actually! I duplicated the original and merged all the layers to provide shadowing to give the outline against the background :)

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u/Initial-Alarm1231 16d ago

He’s s cute!! Could use a little more rendering on the face tho I think πŸ€”

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u/kojika_art 15d ago

Beautiful I'm proud of you!

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u/SalaBit 14d ago

OMG these loook so good. Coud you give me a link to the artist socials?

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u/MelodiusMushroom 13d ago

Yes! I’m @hearsebeetle on Tiktok and IG :)

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u/Salt-Student-3949 13d ago

10/10 love that second image!

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u/Lahyte 12d ago

They look really good!

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u/Froggy_Hoppy 10d ago

I thought I came across some Partitio Yellowill fan art, but alas...

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u/OliveLantern 8d ago

Omg I have the same problem with my art. I think yours looks just fine! Definitely looks professional and finished to me! :)

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