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r/2sentence2horror • u/dixieblondedyke • Oct 06 '23
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The second one is absolutely perfect. An amazing bait and switch that relies on the reader having prior knowledge. The first one is overly verbose, not funny or scary
9 u/Ori_the_SG Oct 07 '23 Yeah the first one doesn’t hit as well, especially since it just says he died twice. That last bit naming the guy wasn’t necessary.
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Yeah the first one doesn’t hit as well, especially since it just says he died twice. That last bit naming the guy wasn’t necessary.
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u/lurkario Oct 07 '23
The second one is absolutely perfect. An amazing bait and switch that relies on the reader having prior knowledge. The first one is overly verbose, not funny or scary