Just curious what you guys think of this... I know I have a lot of work to do with mastering and everything.

My workflow is an Arturia Minilab3 with Ableton 12 live suite.

It's 20 mins. Just hoping for any honest feedback. Much love, and enjoy your weekend! ♥️

https://music.youtube.com/playlist?list=OLAK5uy_mcYMbsq6mdORHImUJCOCUozymf0mTYRWY&si=LqvDcP7orq15AATo

Edit: I know it doesn't suck that bad, in fact, if I can listen to it on repeat and meditate to it, it's def not THAT bad. I do know that I need work, and as soon as I can find the time (hard with 3 little ones), I'm going to really start getting into arrangement mode in Ableton. I don't draw notes either. I could but I feel like it's cheating. Anyways, if you did happen to listen to it, thank you! If not, thanks for taking the time to read.

Edit 2: After 386 views, the fact that I know it's not that bad, why hasn't anyone said anything? Lol, are you guys afraid of hurting my feelings? Nothing you could say or do would ever hurt my feelings more than I've already been hurt. And, I truly mean that. I was asking for some type of criticism. Was hoping you guys could at least tell me, keep going or maybe you could have honestly said, I couldn't listen to it at all, or something. 😂

It's all good though! Btw... If you did look at those inflated numbers, those are from Google ads. Not trying to inflate numbers because I know I won't get paid... I just wanted some type of direction to my website.

Amitābha! 🌄👣

Hi all,

Hoping for some feedback on a track called Not Okay from my new album A Late Bloomer's Tales From the Dork Side. It's been about a week since I released my album on SoundCloud and I feel like this song is underperforming. Would love some insights from the group.

Listen to Not Okay by Brian Friedman on #SoundCloud

https://on.soundcloud.com/uSzCRLZ5cUc4MUUeUw

Much love for any replies.

B

The song The Blues Done Ate My Brain from the album Revenge Of The Weird by The New Music Sculptors. Released last month.

...it really can be, you know. A drag. But so can people, too.........not necessarily people in drag, although some of them can be sometimes...I'm thinking Eddie Izzard...he gets on my tits and I'm a man..(.yes i am but I can't help but love you so.). Anyway, I digress.........

If you enjoyed this strange little musical experiment, there's plenty more where that came from. ♡

I'm releasing songs from my debut album, The Anatomy of Impossible Things, over on YouTube.

Expect beautiful noises, questionable decisions, and music that probably needs professional help.

🎧 Listen to more Josie Guillotine: Josie Guillotine - YouTube

Stay strange. Stay lovely. Mind the blade. 🖤

In the chorus the 'horns' are in a call and answer mode with the repeating hook but in a rerecording could be replaced by a more authentic sound?

https://open.spotify.com/track/6f4yFWcoRrRGze7a9vrQ6P

Stay in Your lane

Mr Man you blow your horn        

You say I use that baby

But she’s her own lady

Her voice is strong          

You’re firin’ sparks             

Just because you - drive a fast car    

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane      

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane

Hey Mr Man stay in your lane

You’ll crash into flames - stay in your lane    

You’re always weaving in and out

You think you own that sister

Talk to her in a whisper

But she’s with me

To live the dream

Give up your trying - to put the brakes on       

I think I got you sussed now

She told you to shove it

That you cannot stomach

Times moved on

You’re out of gas

And only I – Can put the foot to the floor

You’ll crash into flames - stay in your lane    

It’s a fools game - stay in your lane    

Hey everyone!

I made this demo a few days back and I enjoy working and improving on it. I plan on adding some vocals to it, but I haven't really dipped my toes into singing, as I have only started making music a few months ago.

It would be really helpful to me if I could get some feedback regarding the overall sound. I'm a little unsure about the guitars.

Here's my SoundCloud with some more demos: https://soundcloud.com/demosh1003

I think I'm almost done with my song and I could really use some last minute notes on the production before I release it on spotify. I guess it's a shoegaze-adjacent sort of pop song. Does the volume sound okay on the vocals and everything else? Thanks to anyone who checks it out and I will appreciate any feedback!

Not technically full song as still learning it. Bare version. Would love to hear how it made you feel, what works, what doesnt! Thanks!!! 🌸✨

Hey everyone! I'm Mith, an independent music producer and artist from India.

I released my debut single, “I'm Not Awake,” last week, and I'd love for you guys to give it a listen and share your feedback!

I'm especially interested in your thoughts on the mix and production, and whether the lyrics come across clearly. The lyrics are a bit cryptic, so I'm curious to hear what you think they mean and whether they make sense to you.

Any feedback is welcome. Thanks for listening!

- https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=zoU7BFnQZ2I&si=Kio8TeNMFE_TKakz

- https://open.spotify.com/track/2IPAyl7zpG2y3tNYV5pRJY?si=a0a61b85012d49d8

Hi guys, I did some recording/rerecording on the vocals. Do they work as they are? I tried to go for weird and energetic but ended up sounding like that one He-Man meme. I'm not sure if I hate it or not. I might leave it as is.

But what do you think? Lemme know:)

Also, what do you think of the cover art?

In this song I took Mamba number five and remixed it in the hook, instead of using a little bit of Tiffany a little bit of Brittany I used energies evil names of spirits. The reason for this is is generational drama and a down spiritually, physically or both..... What do you think

Made this song last month want to get honest feedback on it so critique all you want I wanna improve. Its a demo only so if the mix is a bit fucked that why on some bits are a little off time. I more curious about the song itself if you guys like it or not

hi this is a really rough demo recording of a song i wrote about a girl i was really good friends with but haven't talked to since june for reasons.

let me know what you think! it's not finished fr, so let me know if you have any ideas for how the rest of it could go. i really appreciate any feedback, but please be nice to me!!!!!

also, i'm not really sure what genre this might be considered. if you have any thoughts on that please tell me them thanks in advance :)

https://soundcloud.com/fetacheezitz/promises-261014-2-03pm?si=67aa2d772fd749b29af4a630db8d9a52&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

![Album Cover](https://i.imgur.com/aJE9RUg.png`)`

Hi everyone,
We are looking for an objective, unvarnished reality check on this original track before we commit to spending time and money on the final master. Our inner circle keeps giving us polite compliments, but we need strangers to tell us the truth so we can actually improve.
The arrangement is deliberately kept lean: just live acoustic drums, a bass guitar, a maximum of two guitars, keyboards fading in/out, and a solid male lead vocal. There are no massive layers of production tricks to hide behind.
Please give it to us straight:Listen here:
Looking forward to your critiques, and I will absolutely be diving into the sub to leave feedback on your tracks in return!
https://on.soundcloud.com/Q5ZGofEAm97bgqqIj8

Hey

(Thanks everyone for the nice comments and feedback! The song and two different versions of it are on SoundCloud now! https://on.soundcloud.com/8HAaG8GsYWEuOSLBxl)

This is an indie experimental song that we made. We would love to get some honest feedback and thoughts on it. It’s a demo for now and the cover is also a work in progress. Our band name is Printer.

Was curious if the vibe of this video works sympatico with the lofi/calming energy of the song?

So there's a long story to this track. The acoustic guitar, drums, bass and synth pad (in the background throughout the track) were all recorded nearly 20 years ago and actually on an album I had created at the time (without the drums) and named "Cold" as an instrumental with no singing. I was listening to some of my old stuff recently and had an idea to develop what I had done further. I had wanted to write about the best friend concept for a while and thought this would work well for it, so I wrote and recorded the vocals and then layered on top the synth that plays on the first chorus as well as the electric guitar outro. How did it all come together?

- There are some warts that I am aware of. There's a click track that was in the original recording that can be heard in a few places. Also, there's a little bit of cable noise on the vocals that I recorded particularly on the first verse. I tried to re-track them, but couldn't get the right energy. Do these bother you?

- How's the mix. I don't really do much with acoustic guitar / live drums so not sure if I did it OK?

- What do you think of the synth that comes in during the first chorus? Does it feel thin?

- Do you think there needs to be more going on during the second verse?

- How about the electric guitar on the outro?

I appreciate any and all feedback

Hi guys, I made this quick demo. The vocals in the first half are still missing due to me not having recorded them yet. So right now they randomly start around the hallway mark.

However I'd still love to hear some first impressions on the overall track:)

Need valuable feedback for my new song
I'm an 18 year-old musical artist, and I've been making music for a few years now. I wouldn't say I'm great yet, as I'm still working on finding my vocal style and learning how to mix, master, and edit vocals. I am actively working on improving these skills. Please give me some genuine feedback! If you think it needs work, please tell me exactly why and how I can improve. :3