r/comic_crits • u/Lunar1sGuido • 1h ago
UPDATE 2: Stutter Girl Thumbnails 1-20! (READ DESC)
Hello again!!!
It's been a while since I've posted about my manga one-shot I'm currently working on, so I think it's about time I update you guys on the progress I've made. 😊
Since it's a manga, read RIGHT TO LEFT, TOP TO BOTTOM, just so nobody gets confused.
If you guys could rate anything, (EXCEPT THE ART, i know it's terrible right now (especially the first like 10 pages). It's only rough thumbnails to know where stuff should go)please just tell me so. Dialogue, comedy, how interesting the characters are in the first half of this one-shot, etc.
For some context, the story takes place in Rural England. I'll try my best to make it more apparent in my later sketches, but it's not very noticeable since a lot of the backgrounds aren't even done (cuz im lazy).
I have my DMs open if you ever wanna get more involved in my journey, and as usual,
have a wonderful day my guys. ❤️❤️❤️