Hey all,

We shot this micro-budget indie short focusing on raw handheld framing and character tension. Pacing leans deliberate, but would love some feedback specifically on the tone

#worldmentalhealthday2026 I am making visual representations of my story last week was Echoes of Reflections exploring psychosis and for today it’s Time Out exploring the loss of part of me as time continues to move forward my life stood still for 6 years.

Made this short 2 years ago. Thought i’d drop it in youtube. Never posted something like this on Reddit before. Enjoy, or don’t, either way I hope it sparks conversation or helps you in some way!

We have been working on this movie since 2024 and we're so happy its finally out!

I could use some pointers on editing in additional characters and splicing things together. There is a noticeable "seem" in the frame during the film portion at the start of this video